Jmanchu
El Capitan
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- Nov 23, 2017
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So, I'm in the process of trying to get two stories posted, with more to come as they're almost finished.
One story is already beta reading phase, with someone doing a volunteer edit, which I can't wait to see when finished.
Another story, tons of views in the editor's forum so there's definitely some interest there, but no replies(Maybe the post is too long or the description of the setting is just not "erotica" enough? idk). No offers for Beta reading or editing, sadly. So, I've taken it upon myself to do the polishing myself before I publish it(still will wait a few days or a week to see if I get at least one bite for a response. Otherwise... Publishing time. Maybe.)
Anyways, onto the subject of the topic at hand: Making compelling summaries and short descriptions are not my strong points for writing story, at all. I am struggling with coming up with a well thought out descriptor for the story I'm thinking of just publishing(the one that's hanging dry in the other forum). Maybe I'm thinking too much, but I feel a good descriptor makes a big difference when it comes to making your story seem enticing enough to click out of a long list of endless stories in this site. So, I would like to know your guys' thoughts and approaches on how you come up with your story descriptions. How do you like to make sure it's inviting enough to make a reader hooked in and tempted to click?
Is it better to come up with a simplified, direct, possibly open-ended sentence for the premise? Or is a more artistic and possibly abstract approach good too? If you have a story that has "chapters," would simply listing the names of the two chapters be alright? The last one is what I've left as so far, since I've wracked my head trying to come up with a good 60-character description and failed so far. "Hero of Light, The Princess of Darkness," are the names of chapters 1 and 2 for the first upcoming part of the story to be published, respectively. It's what I have in the saved draft for the line, so far, for the Literotica story description box in the publishing section.
I've read and researched other works here and how the descriptors tie to the stories, but I just thought why not make a topic here to discuss it? What do you fine folks here think?
One story is already beta reading phase, with someone doing a volunteer edit, which I can't wait to see when finished.
Another story, tons of views in the editor's forum so there's definitely some interest there, but no replies(Maybe the post is too long or the description of the setting is just not "erotica" enough? idk). No offers for Beta reading or editing, sadly. So, I've taken it upon myself to do the polishing myself before I publish it(still will wait a few days or a week to see if I get at least one bite for a response. Otherwise... Publishing time. Maybe.)
Anyways, onto the subject of the topic at hand: Making compelling summaries and short descriptions are not my strong points for writing story, at all. I am struggling with coming up with a well thought out descriptor for the story I'm thinking of just publishing(the one that's hanging dry in the other forum). Maybe I'm thinking too much, but I feel a good descriptor makes a big difference when it comes to making your story seem enticing enough to click out of a long list of endless stories in this site. So, I would like to know your guys' thoughts and approaches on how you come up with your story descriptions. How do you like to make sure it's inviting enough to make a reader hooked in and tempted to click?
Is it better to come up with a simplified, direct, possibly open-ended sentence for the premise? Or is a more artistic and possibly abstract approach good too? If you have a story that has "chapters," would simply listing the names of the two chapters be alright? The last one is what I've left as so far, since I've wracked my head trying to come up with a good 60-character description and failed so far. "Hero of Light, The Princess of Darkness," are the names of chapters 1 and 2 for the first upcoming part of the story to be published, respectively. It's what I have in the saved draft for the line, so far, for the Literotica story description box in the publishing section.
I've read and researched other works here and how the descriptors tie to the stories, but I just thought why not make a topic here to discuss it? What do you fine folks here think?
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