ShelbyDawn57
Neo - Philocalist
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I've seen Kingsman, twice.Now I know enough Brit-speak to get that…
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I've seen Kingsman, twice.Now I know enough Brit-speak to get that…
You've implied a restraint already - "Or just shake out your arms and legs?"The point of that was a gentle reminder that Ella was bound to a bench by wrist and ankle cuffs. I just thought it was maybe not enough…
Rather than a recap....That’s what I meant by a recap in the main story… as opposed to “when we last saw our heroine, she was tried to the railroad tracks…”
Yeah - that’s what I was thinking. But I might just leave it now on reflection.Rather than a recap....
What about building it into the story itself...
A flash back.... A blurry memory...
Just a suggestion
Cagivagurl
I added two words to a sentence and left it at that. Publishing in a few hours.I don't really think you need to, but if you do decide to do it in future chapters, just a sentence or two, at most a paragraph, to let the new reader know how the characters are positioned is fine.