secretLace
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- Aug 7, 2014
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I'm curious how you show the reader that time has passed? Take the following simple example:
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”Maybe we should put your rather impressive tongue on display as well?” She panted as he peeled the panties down and started to lick the wet folds sucking each lip into his mouth and massaging it with his tongue.
Jane hugged them both as they entered her rather spacious studio in the back of the gallery. She moved into the centre of the room where a weird half finished furniture was placed.
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Here the sex scene ends and time has passed as they now are in a different place. When you read it you want to feel the scene end and another take place. How would you do it?
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”Maybe we should put your rather impressive tongue on display as well?” She panted as he peeled the panties down and started to lick the wet folds sucking each lip into his mouth and massaging it with his tongue.
Jane hugged them both as they entered her rather spacious studio in the back of the gallery. She moved into the centre of the room where a weird half finished furniture was placed.
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Here the sex scene ends and time has passed as they now are in a different place. When you read it you want to feel the scene end and another take place. How would you do it?