SimonDoom
Kink Lord
- Joined
- Apr 9, 2015
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When the pizza arrives does anyone care that a dog barks to answer the knock on the door? Of course not. As long as the naked girl opening the door drops to her knees and starts sucking without delay, everyone is happy.
Hold on, now. I thought you were the big advocate for character and plot development. Shouldn't they get to know each other and learn their motivations while she's setting the pizza down before she drops to her knees? Or the pizza manager calls him and wants him to get back quickly to the store and he has to wrestle with the conflict between keeping his job and receiving fellatio?