Altissimus
Irreverently Piquant
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I've found myself reading books on writing recently, and, scarily, enjoying them.
It would seem that far wiser and more experienced minds than mine have basically argued that a lot of the 'rules' we may (or, for that matter, may not) have learnt in school aren't quite as absolute as our tweed-wearing English teachers may have had us believe.
So, I open to the floor, with a genuine interest in all responses, a little quiz. There are no right-or-wrong answers (and no prizes, either); I think what will be interesting on this exercise is the consensus - if there is one.
1) Do you always have to start a new para if you're going to have a new person say some dialogue?
vs
2) Comma after a short intro sentence a) always or b) optionally? e.g.
3) Let's play 'Comma or not':
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It would seem that far wiser and more experienced minds than mine have basically argued that a lot of the 'rules' we may (or, for that matter, may not) have learnt in school aren't quite as absolute as our tweed-wearing English teachers may have had us believe.
So, I open to the floor, with a genuine interest in all responses, a little quiz. There are no right-or-wrong answers (and no prizes, either); I think what will be interesting on this exercise is the consensus - if there is one.
1) Do you always have to start a new para if you're going to have a new person say some dialogue?
'I wanted to know whether or not you could start speech in the middle of a paragraph. "Is there any reason you can't?" I asked.'
vs
'I wanted to know whether or not you could start speech in the middle of a paragraph.
"Is there any reason you can't?" I asked, starting a new paragraph, asserting myself as speaker at the cost of disassociating the direct connection to the previous sentence.'
2) Comma after a short intro sentence a) always or b) optionally? e.g.
'In that moment I decided I wasn't going to be cowed' vs 'In that moment, I deicded I wasn't going to be cowed'
'I must confess I didn't sleep particularly well' vs 'I must confess, I didn't sleep particularly well'
'Nevertheless even his attitude seemed to grate.' vs 'Nevertheless, even his attitude seemed to grate'
3) Let's play 'Comma or not':
a) (easily) '“You won’t be needing this,” and that easily I was rendered naked before strangers.' vs '“You won’t be needing this,” and that easily, I was rendered naked before strangers.'
b) (like me) 'She smiled at me again as she left, and I was glad that she seemed to like me given how good a look at me she had just had.' vs 'She smiled at me again as she left, and I was glad that she seemed to like me, given how good a look at me she had just had.'
c) (in that) 'My uniform was, of course, the same as every other employee I had seen, and in that there was some comfort.' vs 'My uniform was, of course, the same as every other employee I had seen, and in that, there was some comfort.'
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