DustofFallenStars
Better the next day.
- Joined
- Oct 10, 2023
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Feedback was pretty straightforward; move credit to the story event to the intro, tidy up the dialogue punctuation (which, admittedly, I had left in a mess).
Resubmitted now, fingers crossed for prompt response.
(irony being my characters wanted to get there earlier in the evening so as to get their scene done before the room they wanted got busy).
Resubmitted now, fingers crossed for prompt response.
(irony being my characters wanted to get there earlier in the evening so as to get their scene done before the room they wanted got busy).