Arouse me in 5 BDSM words...

[monak4u]

I thrust my pelvis out.

 

[Sir_Winston54]

i kneel down before You
eyes downcast, hands behind back
patiently waiting for Your arrival

Word count? Choose your whip.

I thought maybe it was haiku, but that didn't work...

Then realized it was three five-word phrases intended to arouse. Each works to at least some degree in itself; the combination of the three makes a word triptych that works even better. Perhaps FS would have been better advised to simply enter each phrase as a separate post, but I personally don't have a big issue with it...


as long as it never occurs again

 

[FantasySlut]

I thought maybe it was haiku, but that didn't work...

Then realized it was three five-word phrases intended to arouse. Each works to at least some degree in itself; the combination of the three makes a word triptych that works even better. Perhaps FS would have been better advised to simply enter each phrase as a separate post, but I personally don't have a big issue with it...


as long as it never occurs again

So, shall I run my next set by you before I post it?

 

[Sir_Winston54]

So, shall I run my next set by you before I post it?

Nope. I barely have time to proofread and edit my own posts, PMs, e-mails, work, etc., these days. You can count to five, I'm sure, and stop.

Self-editing, I believe Keroin will tell you, is one of the best ways in the world for a writer to learn to *hear* her words and their meaning, context, subtext, connotations, etc., etc., ad nauseum.

When I taught writing for print and broadcast journalism, students were required to read their copy/text aloud into a recorder, then listen to and critique not only their presentation, but their writing as a craft/art. Many of them were amazed at how much better their writing skills were at the end of each year.

 

[FantasySlut]

Nope. I barely have time to proofread and edit my own posts, PMs, e-mails, work, etc., these days. You can count to five, I'm sure, and stop.

Self-editing, I believe Keroin will tell you, is one of the best ways in the world for a writer to learn to *hear* her words and their meaning, context, subtext, connotations, etc., etc., ad nauseum.

When I taught writing for print and broadcast journalism, students were required to read their copy/text aloud into a recorder, then listen to and critique not only their presentation, but their writing as a craft/art. Many of them were amazed at how much better their writing skills were at the end of each year.

Sent you a PM

 

[marriedman1973]

I have a dirty secret...

 

[desireinyellow]

Lovely little swats arouse me...

 

[ezwriter]

Arms behind, fingertips to elbow

 

[desireinyellow]

Arching my back and bracing...

 

[monak4u]

Leaning over, kissing your lips.

 

[FantasySlut]

Ready to serve, when needed

 

[cliper2]

Fetch my thick belt. Now.

 

[cliper2]

Pull your hair back. Now.

 

[Sir_Winston54]

Cane stripes,
White, red,
rising.

 

[lilone92]

May I cum Sir? Please...

 

[monak4u]

Sore, struggling, shivering, then cumming.

 

[Curious_in_Cali]

Mornin. Your coffee is ready.

 

[cliper2]

Smiling eyes peering over cup.

 

[monak4u]

sitting on couch, sipping coffee.

 

[dangersexqueen]

That feels so fucking good.

 

[FantasySlut]

Needing, craving your total control

 

[kiwi_submissive]

Whimpering and begging for more.

 

[monak4u]

my holes exposed for you.

 

[cliper2]

Bare neck; teeth raking. Marking.

 

[DanielaRo]

Tied up spreadeagle therefore vulnerable