TheRedChamber
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I'm working in Asia and we recently had Golden Week, which I used productively to restart writing on Lit after publishing a couple of stories about eight years ago. I've published six new stories in various catagories in the last two/three weeks and would like to get some intelligent feedback before deciding on what to do next and how to improve. My list of stories is here:
https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1936875&page=submissions
If anyone is looking for anything to read, I'd appreciate any comments and suggestions you might have. I'd describe the main features of my writing as follows:
1) One-shot stories with fairly complicated plots (considering the length).
2) More focus on story than on sex (one comment has suggested I'm getting the balance wrong)
3) They don't always have happy endings and people don't always say yes to everytihng.
4) A mix of male and female view points.
5) A wide range of catagories as I'm currently trying out things to see what works.
6) A not very serious to humourous writing style depending on the story.
7) I'm aware I need to get an editor and there are more minor mistakes than there should be.
8) British English - though actual settings vary.
List of Stories:
Before She's Thirty, Midnight in Italy,Barbie Ferrari: These are the stories I'm most proud of and are probably most typical of my current style. Two First Time stories and one that involves an inexperienced protagonist. Only the last one of these was rated 'hot', so it would be interesting to know if people think it is substantially better than the others.
How My Mother Met You A taboo story which stops just short of incest. Has been quite low rated. Not sure if this is because it doesn't match the usual tone of this catagory or if it has other problems (it's a bit melodramitic in places)
All Three HolesThis was the first story I published in my latest writing spree, and was maily intended to get over my long writers block. It's more of a stoke than anything else I've written and is a little on the gynocological side. It may have been better in non-Consent as I got a lot of complaints about the set-up (which I largely agree with).
The Sorcerer with a Thousand Names This is a long-form joke with a punchline. Practically no-one seems to view humour and this has the lowest number of votes of any of my stories despite remaining at number two for more than a week. (I had fun writing it though).
Sleeper TrainBeijing ChickenThese are my older stories from eight years ago. No need for feedback.
So that's me. Any suggestions on any story would be very welcome.
https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1936875&page=submissions
If anyone is looking for anything to read, I'd appreciate any comments and suggestions you might have. I'd describe the main features of my writing as follows:
1) One-shot stories with fairly complicated plots (considering the length).
2) More focus on story than on sex (one comment has suggested I'm getting the balance wrong)
3) They don't always have happy endings and people don't always say yes to everytihng.
4) A mix of male and female view points.
5) A wide range of catagories as I'm currently trying out things to see what works.
6) A not very serious to humourous writing style depending on the story.
7) I'm aware I need to get an editor and there are more minor mistakes than there should be.
8) British English - though actual settings vary.
List of Stories:
Before She's Thirty, Midnight in Italy,Barbie Ferrari: These are the stories I'm most proud of and are probably most typical of my current style. Two First Time stories and one that involves an inexperienced protagonist. Only the last one of these was rated 'hot', so it would be interesting to know if people think it is substantially better than the others.
How My Mother Met You A taboo story which stops just short of incest. Has been quite low rated. Not sure if this is because it doesn't match the usual tone of this catagory or if it has other problems (it's a bit melodramitic in places)
All Three HolesThis was the first story I published in my latest writing spree, and was maily intended to get over my long writers block. It's more of a stoke than anything else I've written and is a little on the gynocological side. It may have been better in non-Consent as I got a lot of complaints about the set-up (which I largely agree with).
The Sorcerer with a Thousand Names This is a long-form joke with a punchline. Practically no-one seems to view humour and this has the lowest number of votes of any of my stories despite remaining at number two for more than a week. (I had fun writing it though).
Sleeper TrainBeijing ChickenThese are my older stories from eight years ago. No need for feedback.
So that's me. Any suggestions on any story would be very welcome.
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