Darkhorse40
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I had my first short story published two weeks ago and I have completed the first draft of my second, which is around 5,000 words. https://www.literotica.com/s/first-time-with-a-girl-3
Before I submit it, I am eager to ensure that I do not make the same mistakes that I made in my first submission (lack of dialogue, not building the setting and characters, among other things). I have worked on these but it is still a work in progress.
If anyone is interested in reading a few paragraphs, I can paste them here, or else send the story by email.
The category is lesbian/group sex, and it is entitled "My first time with a couple (FFM).
Many thanks! DH
Before I submit it, I am eager to ensure that I do not make the same mistakes that I made in my first submission (lack of dialogue, not building the setting and characters, among other things). I have worked on these but it is still a work in progress.
If anyone is interested in reading a few paragraphs, I can paste them here, or else send the story by email.
The category is lesbian/group sex, and it is entitled "My first time with a couple (FFM).
Many thanks! DH
