Do your readers write Alternate endings in the comments

[Zootonius]

They eat petite blondes for breakfast. In their wet dreams of course.

Em

Took me a minute to get the double entendre

 

[Imstillfun]

I write Loving Wives stories, too. They're mostly first person from the swinger husband POV.

Some of the comments I get try to predict the future, such as divorce, wife cheating on him, or the ass fucking the husband should expect from the wife's strap-on in the future.

Does that count?

This is exactly what I get. But I write first person wife’s pov. They practically write a whole new story. I’m amazed by the effort they put in. why?

 

[Imstillfun]

From everything I've heard, it sounds like a minefield. But I might try my hand at it sometime. I'll have to check out your stories.

If you read my stories, read the comments, they’re so much fun.

 

[Lifestyle66]

This is exactly what I get. But I write first person wife’s pov. They practically write a whole new story. I’m amazed by the effort they put in. why?

Think about it ... that is merely one person posting their comment ... out of almost 8 BILLION people on this planet.

Just try to keep it in perspective and have your own fun doing what you want to do.

 

[Imstillfun]

Think about it ... that is merely one person posting their comment ... out of almost 8 BILLION people on this planet.

Just try to keep it in perspective and have your own fun doing what you want to do.

I measure my success in followers, I have lots, so I love the comments. I’m just amazed they take the time.

 

[gunhilltrain]

He wrote his version of the ending. His author note is long and explains the story. Who says I can't be inspirational?

https://www.literotica.com/s/moms-christmas-tradition-redux

That was pretty strange. At least he did link to your story, although I wonder how many readers actually followed it. Also, I didn't realize that this was around eight years ago. Then he stopped publishing a couple of years later. People certainly loved his Non-Human stories.

 

[Duleigh]

I have not had anyone offer alternate endings, but in a couple of stories that got close to LW content (they weren't, the plot made it look that way) I've had readers tell me their sad stories. Dude, I understand, you chose poorly, here's a handkerchief.

I wouldn’t touch LW with a robotically controlled bargepole in an elephant’s condom

I am hoping a bargepole is similar to a railroad pushpole, otherwise there's a euphemism that I missed and my veteran buddies are going to give me a lot of grief over it.

 

[lovecraft68]

That was pretty strange. At least he did link to your story, although I wonder how many readers actually followed it. Also, I didn't realize that this was around eight years ago. Then he stopped publishing a couple of years later. People certainly loved his Non-Human stories.

I used to correspond with him all the time via e-mail then we spoke on the phone a couple of times. He was pretty young, still in college. Lost touch, not sure why he stopped writing, but he commented on my LW story last year so he's still reading here.

 

[EmilyMiller]

I have not had anyone offer alternate endings, but in a couple of stories that got close to LW content (they weren't, the plot made it look that way) I've had readers tell me their sad stories. Dude, I understand, you chose poorly, here's a handkerchief.


I am hoping a bargepole is similar to a railroad pushpole, otherwise there's a euphemism that I missed and my veteran buddies are going to give me a lot of grief over it.

I never heard it when I was in London, but my Mother-In-Law-to-be uses it. She kinda sounds like the Queen used to. The barge has a very long aaaarrr sound in the middle.

Em

 

[Duleigh]

They're similar things, a barge pole was used by the barge crew to propel the barge by "punting" or to move the barge around something. A Railroad pushpole was used to push a car on a different track. It was a very, very dangerous operation and was outlawed which means it was probably handy, easy to do, and saved a train crew hours.

 

[MajorRewrite]

I'm tempted to say, "As long as you give me a credit, you can write your sequel idea and we'll see how you do with it." I doubt that any of them would accept the offer. They likely haven't even read my reply.

Two people wrote unauthorized twisted full revision/sequels to one of my LW stories. They can’t stand that my story is popular and isn’t BTB.

So yeah, if you give the okay I think you’d certainly get sequels.

The guys who change the story or extend it in the comments section are lazy buggers in comparison!

 

[gunhilltrain]

They're similar things, a barge pole was used by the barge crew to propel the barge by "punting" or to move the barge around something. A Railroad pushpole was used to push a car on a different track. It was a very, very dangerous operation and was outlawed which means it was probably handy, easy to do, and saved a train crew hours.

Thread drift: I thought I knew something about this, but I've never heard of a railroad pushpole, at least in the United States. How long ago was this, maybe the 1920's? It sounds like something very old. Maybe it was used more recently in other countries?

Barge poles also sound like something very antique.

 

[Imstillfun]

Ummm…. Is the fact that we are now discussing barge poles an example of someone writ an alternate ending?

 

[gunhilltrain]

I know you'd tell me to look it up, so I did. They were used in the U.S. from the 1870's to the 1960's. Here, a locomotive uses one, which may have been a bit safer than having humans do it. I'm guessing this is in the 1950's. You can learn the strangest things on Lit, I see. (I have used trains in two Lit stories, and in one other on another site.)

https://railrelicstoday.com/pics/Pole-2.jpg

 

[Duleigh]

I thought I knew something about this, but I've never heard of a railroad pushpole, at least in the United States. How long ago was this, maybe the 1920's?

Here's an example of poling, you can see the right hand poling pocket on the front of the locomotive. Oddly this dangerous procedure is still legal but no one has done it since the late 1960's

Is the fact that we are now discussing barge poles an example of someone writ an alternate ending?

Ummm.... yes?

 

[gunhilltrain]

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Here's an example of poling, you can see the right hand poling pocket on the front of the locomotive. Oddly this dangerous procedure is still legal but no one has done it since the late 1960's

Ummm.... yes?

We must have cross-posted it, because I just posted a similar photo to yours. (Diesel versus steam.) Strange how people can sometimes think in parallel ways.

 

[gunhilltrain]

Two people wrote unauthorized twisted full revision/sequels to one of my LW stories. They can’t stand that my story is popular and isn’t BTB.

So yeah, if you give the okay I think you’d certainly get sequels.

The guys who change the story or extend it in the comments section are lazy buggers in comparison!

i guess I wouldn't mind unauthorized versions as long as they didn't copy mine too closely. Even if they did, I doubt I'd drop a dime on them to the moderators. Yeah, it's amazing the amount of energy people will put into proving themselves right.

 

[gunhilltrain]

Never had that. Then I wouldn’t touch LW with a robotically controlled bargepole in an elephant’s condom (now I read that, it could be either me or the bargepole in the condom - maybe both?).

I get requests for continuations or sequels. Which is nice, but sometimes odd if a story is clearly stand-alone.

A few times people had suggested endings to a sex scene. E.g. “it would have been better if he licked his cum out of your ass at the end”, but that’s not really rewriting.

Em

I guess I'm kind of old-fashioned, but after a sex scene I usually have the participants talking, having drinks, listening to music, maybe even having an argument. That seems realistic, I suppose. If it takes place in a car, I will describe what they do eventually on the way back, which is also talking, playing the radio, or whatever. Sometimes they will be inspired to drive on an excursion somewhere. In one case, they drive somewhere else to have sex again there, although I don't describe it in the same detail as the first time around.

 

[EmilyMiller]

I guess I'm kind of old-fashioned, but after a sex scene I usually have the participants talking, having drinks, listening to music, maybe even having an argument. That seems realistic..

I seem to finish a lot of mine with the people involved having a nap.

Em

 

[gunhilltrain]

I seem to finish a lot of mine with the people involved having a nap.

Em

That's a good one too, and also quite realistic.

 

[EmilyMiller]

That's a good one too, and also quite realistic.

Especially for me

 

[onehitwanda]

Especially for me

Your nickname is now Napdragon.

 

[EmilyMiller]

Your nickname is now Napdragon.

I quite like that

 

[gunhilltrain]

From everything I've heard, it sounds like a minefield. But I might try my hand at it sometime. I'll have to check out your stories.

Loving Wives writers carelessly enter that section, and one of them pays the price.

"What kind is it?" "The kind that blows up!"

 

[SimonDoom]

I'm working on a full-on, no-apologies hot-wife story I'm going to post to Loving Wives soon and I'm curious to see how many readers tell me they are sure the husband and wife end up unhappy, disease-ridden, on the street, or dead.