geronimo_appleby
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I got an idea, I think, for a story. Just not sure if it will work. Hmmmm.
there's only one way to find out ...
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I got an idea, I think, for a story. Just not sure if it will work. Hmmmm.
there's only one way to find out ...
Right. I'll watch some hockey tonight and see what happens. Hockey solves everything, right?
No, seriously, I guess I just need to give the kids a sedative so I have time to write.
Against sound reason I've ventured back into The LW category. I'd really appreciate feedback if you get a chance to read it. I've enjoyed the ones I've read so far in this year's contest. I'll get to more of them soon.
Thanks.
http://www.literotica.com/s/valentines-day-divorce
a pint of jack daniel's works on my son.
... mind you, he is 26.
My kids are still at the Benadryl stage.
Remembering that far back, liquid baby Tylenol was the toddlers Jack Daniels. Couple of drops of that and see ya later!
Never saw Tylenol have that effect on kids, but Benadryl is pretty reliable that way. I've heard a lot of people say they give it to their kids before flights and such.
Never saw Tylenol have that effect on kids, but Benadryl is pretty reliable that way. I've heard a lot of people say they give it to their kids before flights and such.
Wow! You really stirred things up with this one. If you were trying to piss off every male reader in LW you probably made a good start. Well written, very cruel tale. I kept waiting for some kind of redeeming element in the wife, but no, nada, zilch. Hoping for a last minute change of heart, or something. No such luck.
It was somewhat in the vein of your other 2 pre-nup stories (there may be more, I don't recall) Marrying a Doctor, and Negotiating the Pre-nup. Those two women were conniving, but seemed to care for the man, and though tricky, they weren't complete asswipes. Not like Cassie.
I liked Negotiating the Pre-nup. Slick girl. Hot too. If her man doesn't have enough brains to figure out what she was up to, oh well. It was all up and up, using his desire to bend things her way.
Not like Valentine's Day Divorce. Not very likable. Heck, strike the very.
I've poked the readers a few times (notably Bad Heather and A Joke Ch.02) but never so viciously. The comments are interesting, will be more interesting to see how it comes out.
Ninety nine per cent of the story is written. I just need an ending. I wonder if "Oh, look! There's something sparkly over there" would work.
A from the good little witch.
Ninety nine per cent of the story is written. I just need an ending. I wonder if "Oh, look! There's something sparkly over there" would work.
A from the good little witch.
That probably beats out my "There was a blinding flash and everybody dies" ending to one story.
I have two stories that end in death. One tanked, one scored really well. how knows...
There we go, submitted and now the muse is free to move about and play.
get to it, slacker.