LongDraw
Really Really Experienced
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- Jan 12, 2022
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Hello and thank you so much for reading this. This is a story I started writing back in September of 2018. Obviously, none of us had any idea that a real-world pandemic would hit just over a year later, but it spurred me on to complete this novel. I would like to give many thanks to Volunteer Editor Phil Anderer for his immense amount of help in fixing multiple aspects of the narrative writing.
All persons discussed and described in any forms of sexual and or intimate terms are and were 18+ years old, or if under 18 years old are considered in certain states with the U.S. to be legally allowed to marry and have children with parental consent. NOTE: Literotica does not publish fiction featuring people under the age of 18 in sexual situations regardless of where the story takes place. - Admin
While there is a point in the story where incest and inbreeding become a primary focus as a driver for the story, I want to state that I do not condone this dangerous practice in real life. As this is a work of fiction, I also implore all my readers to recognize scenes that are fictional and not intended to be reenacted in real life.
I hope you enjoy my story. Please keep in mind that elements in the story are being reworked to get as close to non-fiction while still having a fictional story. I understand that my English writing skills are not that of a university English professor, but I have written policy and procedure documents that are actually utilized regularly in 80% of the U.S. medical industry. What I am asking for here is the thoughts of other authors here about the story overall, more so chapter by chapter or scene by scene. Please allow VE Phil Anderer to concern himself with any spelling or grammar corrections overall.
Thank you.
*Note to moderator* This story has already been published at VY, but is still waiting for a very large number of edits from Volunteer Editor Phil Anderer and a about 10,000 words of additional story content added since the original file was submitted. I'll change the 2nd post to be direct links to the published stories once Phil Anderer and I have all major revisions complete and the edited content is approved again. Thank you for approved the first major edit.
*Note to readers* I have attempted to restore the formatting in the Word document to the posted story. Also, as of the thread being posted 2/8/2022, the story is about 35k words. I have intentionally changed the text color of notes sections that are not converted to story formatting to Cyan. You are welcome to read it by simply highlighting the Cyan sections.
All persons discussed and described in any forms of sexual and or intimate terms are and were 18+ years old, or if under 18 years old are considered in certain states with the U.S. to be legally allowed to marry and have children with parental consent. NOTE: Literotica does not publish fiction featuring people under the age of 18 in sexual situations regardless of where the story takes place. - Admin
While there is a point in the story where incest and inbreeding become a primary focus as a driver for the story, I want to state that I do not condone this dangerous practice in real life. As this is a work of fiction, I also implore all my readers to recognize scenes that are fictional and not intended to be reenacted in real life.
I hope you enjoy my story. Please keep in mind that elements in the story are being reworked to get as close to non-fiction while still having a fictional story. I understand that my English writing skills are not that of a university English professor, but I have written policy and procedure documents that are actually utilized regularly in 80% of the U.S. medical industry. What I am asking for here is the thoughts of other authors here about the story overall, more so chapter by chapter or scene by scene. Please allow VE Phil Anderer to concern himself with any spelling or grammar corrections overall.
Thank you.
*Note to moderator* This story has already been published at VY, but is still waiting for a very large number of edits from Volunteer Editor Phil Anderer and a about 10,000 words of additional story content added since the original file was submitted. I'll change the 2nd post to be direct links to the published stories once Phil Anderer and I have all major revisions complete and the edited content is approved again. Thank you for approved the first major edit.
*Note to readers* I have attempted to restore the formatting in the Word document to the posted story. Also, as of the thread being posted 2/8/2022, the story is about 35k words. I have intentionally changed the text color of notes sections that are not converted to story formatting to Cyan. You are welcome to read it by simply highlighting the Cyan sections.
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