cockroach stench

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s.j.
2014-11-25

Between this and your Maggot poem, I smell an insect themed poetry book in the making.

If that is what I'm smelling.

Could be something else entirely.

lousy poetry

butters said:

lousy poetry

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Repeated applications of Delousing Powder should rectify that.

the thing is, whatever my personal opinions of senna as a poster, i generally have some respect for his poetry. this shambolic piece lacks the skill to work as acerbic, pointed, or pithy. perhaps senna feels that his target audience isn't worthy of his efforts; byron, on the other hand, was true to his poetry, delivering scathing attacks whilst retaining his authenticity as a fine poet. senna's offer is puerile and poetically flabby.

This is thanks I get for pointing out all of Senna's One Hit Wonder thread names are too similar and thus make it impossible for everyone else to differentiate which is which.

Educated? Perhaps.

Lacking in common sense and courtesy? Definitely.

Senna Jawa said:

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cockroach stench

the cockroach dogs
funny how vicious they are
foul cockroach dogs
so many of them that accidentally
you step on them all the time
but there are always more

the foul cockroach dogs
stink non-stop a lot
but are too small
to have soul​

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s.j.
2014-11-25

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die, die, cockroach dogs
high, high, on cockroach drugs
cockroach dongs and cockroach sluts
all up at the fuckin mall
and fuckin skaters too
you think they'ed drop a dime
in the Salvation Army pot
I'll clap 'em with my bell
red terror straight from hell
and what will the coppers do?

Arrest someone in a Santa suit?

Merry Christmas and ho,ho,ho
and all the fuckin hoe, hoe, hoes

Jesus, black friday brings out the best of us