Last Daughter of Krypton: Legion OOC

umm.. does anybody have any problems with anything i've written so far? Not sure if it's anygood. Not wanting praise or anything. just assurance that it's not total garbage.
 
I may be the last person to arrive at this particular conclusion, but I think maybe that Mitch Foust is a good artist who draws girls really pretty.

(Wyld, you've probably known about this guy forever, I'm tardy to the party.)

But!

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Yeppers, I knows some Foust!:)

An I love loves me some Black Mary!
 
umm.. does anybody have any problems with anything i've written so far? Not sure if it's anygood. Not wanting praise or anything. just assurance that it's not total garbage.

:: grins :: You know what I liked?

I like that Xarathos claimed to Ceriel that he never lied, but the first words out of the bastard's mouth to the priestly types demanding his name, rank, and seriel number are a bunch of equivocations.

So he lied about never lying. Sliiiiiiiick.

I'm still considering the cosmic ramifications of the Skrogg perishing ignominously; you know, the ripple effect with that sort of thing can be positively Endless. XD
 
Yeppers, I knows some Foust!:)

An I love loves me some Black Mary!

I want to see Foust do a picture of Black Alice in the Shazam getup.

That would be epic.

(But the shot of Diana holding Captain America's shield is sexy as Hell. What is it with her and boys named "Steve?")
 
:: grins :: You know what I liked?

I like that Xarathos claimed to Ceriel that he never lied, but the first words out of the bastard's mouth to the priestly types demanding his name, rank, and seriel number are a bunch of equivocations.

So he lied about never lying. Sliiiiiiiick.

I'm still considering the cosmic ramifications of the Skrogg perishing ignominously; you know, the ripple effect with that sort of thing can be positively Endless. XD

Weeeellll.. he is a Deamon.

as for the Skrogg.. she only burned one planet. they have dozens of others. (she just took out the closest to her home.)
 
Weeeellll.. he is a Deamon.

as for the Skrogg.. she only burned one planet. they have dozens of others. (she just took out the closest to her home.)

I wonder if Liz has ever had dealings with The Skrogg?

(That reminds me, I should totally write the flashback where she and that Lantern wreck those Dominators.)
 
and if Allana ever does get a chance to "stand down" form combat action she'll put on something more.. comfortable.

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Unless this is one of the designs that the armour can take on. (probably not though)
 
I wonder if Liz has ever had dealings with The Skrogg?

(That reminds me, I should totally write the flashback where she and that Lantern wreck those Dominators.)

I sooo need a score card of who's who. Gonna have to make a list of characters.. and who's dating/was dating/wants to date whom.

as well as all the various names of each...

sigh.. i need to add like 6 hours to each day.
 
Well, let's see here. :: cracks knuckles ::

Jaymie Rozymac Greystone: Valkyrie Missile 3, "VM3," "Thermangel," or "The Other Val." (maybe wants to date Jo "Ultra Girl" Nah, and is maybe curious about "Wildfire" Tennylson, aka ERG-1) Descendant of Kyle "Wraith" Greystone.

Querl Dox: Brainiac Five, "Brainy." (wants to date Caroline "Powergirl" Harrison) Exile from Colu, Inheritor of Milton "BRAINIAC" Fine.

Caroline Harrison: Powergirl. (wants to date Querl "Brainiac Five" Dox) Descendant of Kara "Supergirl" Zor-El, aka Kara Kent. [Belongs to Beloved, Inimitable TearsoftheWorld.]

Ayla Ranzz: Lightning Lass. (wants to date Reep "Chameleon" Daggle) Twin Sister of Lightning Lad.

Elizabeth "Liz" Greystone: Green Lantern 2261. (wants to date J'onn "Martian Manhunter" J'onzz, aka John Jones, aka Rene Jacques Brande) Daughter of Kyle "Wraith" Greystone.

Garth Ranzz: Lightning Lad. (wants to date Imra "Saturn Girl" Ardeen) Twin Brother of Lightning Lass.

Rond Vidar: Green Lantern in Training 2814, "Teen Lantern." (unattached) Scientist, Historian, Time-Travel Enthusiast.

Tinya Wazzo: Phantom Girl. (used to date Jo "Ultra Girl" Nah) Daughter of Winema Wazzo, U.P.V.P.

Tasmia Mallor: Shadow Lass. (wants to date Kyle "Wraith" Greystone) Shadow Champion and descendant of Shadow natives.

Nura Nal: Dream Girl. (destined to date Thom "Star Boy" Kallor?) Last Survivor of Naltor.

Cuatro Falconer: Aztek. (haunted) Legion Academy Cadet.

April Dumaka: Catspaw. (probably has a crush on Brin "Timber Wolf" Londo) Legion Academy Cadet.

Xao Jin: Dragonmage. (miiiiiiiight have a crush on Zoe "Kinetix" Saugin) Legion Academy Cadet.

Tenzil Kem, Jr.: Matter-Eater Lad. (hits on anything that moves) Legion Academy Cadet, son of Legion HQ's wisecracking caterer.

Jan Arrah: Element Lad. (is really really good friends with Jonah "Fate" Tennylson, aka "Kid Eternity") Last Survivor of Trom.

Lar Gand: M'onel. (has an unrequited crush on Raya-Sen of Krypton, also kinda likes Jo "Ultra Girl" Nah) Secretly Long-Lost Savior/Worldseeder "Valor."

Jazmin Cullen: Kid Quantum. (would probably date Rokk "Cosmic Boy" Krinn if no Lydda "Night Girl" Jath shows up) Sister of previous "Kid Quantum," deceased James Cullen.

Carrie Brown-Drake: The Remnant. (fascinated by The Batman) Curator of Batcave Prime.

Bruce Wayne: The Gray Ghost. (haunted) Digital psionic Motherbox archive of the original "Batman's" neuropsychic net. [Belonged to Much-Missed and Ever-Heroic Superman1496.]

Ceriel. (off the market?) Angel of The Raven Host of Heaven, formerly human named Ceri Gwyneth McCrimmon.

Daniel: Dream of The Endless. (has had many loves, some of them mortal, though this is forbidden) The manifestation and personification of Dream. Not to be confused with Daniel, The Scion of Light, though they are named after the same Biblical figure.

Rachel: Raven of Dream. (devoted to Dream) A familiar face from long ago.

The Doctor. (haunted) Last Survivor of timelost planet Gallifrey, Time Lord, formerly human named James "Jamie" David Hamilton.

The Guardians of The Universe. (sworn to celibacy) Immortal, disciplined governing body of The Green Lantern Corps.

The Fists of The Guardians. (asexual) Cybernetic soldiers of The Guardians employed when no Lanterns are available.

Jack. Mysterious Orange Cat.
 
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Well, let's see here. :: cracks knuckles ::

Jaymie Rozymac Greystone: Valkyrie Missile 3, "VM3," or "The Other Val." (maybe wants to date Jo "Ultra Girl" Nah, and is maybe curious about "Wildfire" Tennylson, aka ERG-1) Descendant of Kyle "Wraith" Greystone.

Querl Dox: Brainiac Five, "Brainy." (wants to date Caroline "Powergirl" Harrison) Exile from Colu, Inheritor of Milton "BRAINIAC" Fine.

Caroline Harrison: Powergirl. (wants to date Querl "Brainiac Five" Dox) Descendant of Kara "Supergirl" Zor-El, aka Kara Kent. [Belongs to Beloved, Inimitable TearsoftheWorld.]

Ayla Ranzz: Lightning Lass. (wants to date Reep "Chameleon" Daggle) Twin Sister of Lightning Lad.

Elizabeth "Liz" Greystone: Green Lantern 2261. (wants to date J'onn "Martian Manhunter" J'onzz, aka John Jones, aka Rene Jacques Brande) Daughter of Kyle "Wraith" Greystone.

Garth Ranzz: Lightning Lad. (wants to date Imra "Saturn Girl" Ardeen) Twin Brother of Lightning Lass.

Rond Vidar: Green Lantern in Training 2814, "Teen Lantern." (unattached) Scientist, Historian, Time-Travel Enthusiast.

Tinya Wazzo: Phantom Girl. (used to date Jo "Ultra Girl" Nah) Daughter of Winema Wazzo, U.P.V.P.

Tasmia Mallor: Shadow Lass. (wants to date Kyle "Wraith" Greystone) Shadow Champion and descendant of Shadow natives.

Nura Nal: Dream Girl. (destined to date Thom "Star Boy" Kallor?) Last Survivor of Naltor.

Cuatro Falconer: Aztek. (haunted) Legion Academy Cadet.

April Dumaka: Catspaw. (probably has a crush on Brin "Timber Wolf" Londo) Legion Academy Cadet.

Xao Jin: Dragonmage. (miiiiiiiight have a crush on Zoe "Kinetix" Saugin) Legion Academy Cadet.

Jan Arrah: Element Lad. (is really really good friends with Jonah "Fate" Tennylson, aka "Kid Eternity") Last Survivor of Trom.

Lar Gand: M'onel. (has an unrequited crush on Raya-Sen of Krypton, also kinda likes Jo "Ultra Girl" Nah) Secretly Long-Lost Savior/Worldseeder "Valor."

Jazmin Cullen: Kid Quantum. (would probably date Rokk "Cosmic Boy" Krinn if no Lydda "Night Girl" Jath shows up) Sister of previous "Kid Quantum," deceased James Cullen.

Carrie Brown-Drake: The Remnant. (fascinated by The Batman) Curator of Batcave Prime.

Bruce Wayne: The Gray Ghost. (haunted) Digital psionic Motherbox archive of the original "Batman's" neuropsychic net.

Ted Grant: Wildcat, "Uncle Ted." (lost-and-found love of Queen Hippolyta of Themyscira) Stubborn ol' fist-slinger, granted nine lives by The Goddess Ixchel.

Ceriel. (off the market?) Angel of The Raven Host of Heaven, formerly human named Ceri Gwyneth McCrimmon.

The Doctor. (haunted) Last Survivor of timelost planet Gallifrey, Time Lord, formerly human named James "Jamie" David Hamilton.

Jack. Mysterious Orange Cat.





Holy crap...

O.O

::Blink:: ::Blink::
 
lol

maybe Kyle should show her how to step into Shadow

Oh, man, that would be amazing!

Not only does she get to hang out with The Scion, but she'll be the first Talokian to visit Shadow since the barriers closed up...!

Man, she's egotistical already, but you're gonna give her some legitimate bragging rights like woah. :D
 
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