Actingup
Mostly Harmless
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- Feb 12, 2018
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And then you'll shout everybody here some pizza, right? And we'll eat it nude together.I'll look it over and make sure i haven't missed any other wandering quotation marks and such and try again to submit it..... we'll see.
I agree with the suggestions made, including the present/past tense issue. Just one extra comment.... last year, there were an average of 165 stories published per day. That's an incredible load for Laurel to handle, and she has to try and maintain high standards with minimal time for detailed feedback. Please don't take any rejections personally - work with the process as best you can, and it helps keep the site running (and free for us to participate in).
Off my soapbox now.