sr71plt
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I might add that, taking an objective view of the few stories I've read of JBJ's, he shouldn't expect accolades at Literotica based solely on the writing. He writes well, but doesn't punctuate well. The kicker, though, is that his stories aren't erotic--they aren't anything that a reader would normally come to an erotica Web site to read. They are about the underbelly of society and are raw and gritty and in your face. I couldn't see them as turning anyone on, and that's what a preponderance of readers come to Literotica to receive, I think. An author who writes those kinds of stories shouldn't expect hot ratings on an erotica site no matter how good the story is. He's simply trying to force a round peg into a square hole with each story. This shouldn't change what he writes; but it should prompt him to be more realistic in what he expects as a response to the stories--even if he had started posting stories from a clean reputation slate, which he didn't.
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