How complex are your stories?

[PapaRomantic]

Are Hallmark Christmas movies complex? That seems to be the level of complexity to which I aspire.

But sometimes complexity sneaks into my stories through the mental deep dive I like to do. That seems to be the way the art of tension seems to appear.

The current story I'm working on has more characters than my usual works but I'm trying to keep the story fairly simple anyway.

I wear out so many pairs of pants writing my stories...

 

[Bramblethorn]

as @Bramblethorn loves to point out, the two together are not legal on Literotica.

Well, it depends how they're packaged.

 

[SimonDoom]

Continuously so smooth, if not very discrete. While this isn’t an outright Lie, and even has a ring of truth, I see manifold problems in this field - a bundle in fact - which you clearly haven’t vectored in as yet. I think there is space in your original text to loop back and make some compact, but complete, comments to cover this. I believe this would be the normal path forward. Simple, right?

I'd like to jump into this with some math puns of my own, but I know if I did I'd just end up with Pi all over my face.

 

[onehitwanda]

I'd like to jump into this with some math puns of my own, but I know if I did I'd just end up with Pi all over my face.

But you'd look so radiant.

I'm sorry

 

[StillStunned]

This discussion seems to be going round in circles.

 

[Bamagan]

This discussion seems to be going round in circles.

Your evidence for that is merely circumstantial.

 

[TheLobster]

This discussion seems to be going round in circles.

It does seem rather derivative.

 

[ShelbyDawn57]

Your evidence for that is merely circumstantial.

I was going to say tangential, but this works, two.

 

[StillStunned]

I was going to say tangential, but this works, two.

This is probably a sine that we're scraping the barrel.

 

[THBGato]

This is probably a sine that we're scraping the barrel.

If you are trying to be funny with trig-adjacent jokes, it's had the opposite effect. You need a new angle.

 

[onehitwanda]

If you are trying to be funny with trig-adjacent jokes, it's had the opposite effect. You need a new angle.

It's a reflex of his.

 

[StillStunned]

It's a reflex of his.

I felt that one acutely.

 

[onehitwanda]

I felt that one acutely.

I made a camembert of your puns, grouping them by obtuseness, but with this one I feel you squared the circle.

 

[TheLobster]

You need a new angle.

The highly non-trivial replies that followed yours are clear counterexamples that refute your hypotenuse.

 

[StillStunned]

I made a camembert of your puns, grouping them by obtuseness, but with this one I feel you squared the circle.

As if these puns weren't already cheesy enough.

 

[Five_Inch_Heels]

And that about sums it all up.

 

[Bamagan]

As if these puns weren't already cheesy enough.

We'll need to navigate future puns Caerphilly, or the math jokes will be down for the count.

 

[Five_Inch_Heels]

How complex are your stories?


The Literoticature Forumnal Complication Equation.

 

[AG31]

In my experience if two people aren’t attracted to each other, they generally won’t have satisfying sex. Or at least I don’t write my stories with that premise. Maybe it’s a personal preference.

What about the worlds of many-to-one and BDSM dungeons and most CFNM? Stuff like that? Sounds to me like you're thinking about love, not sex.

 

[AG31]

I am more and more attracted to nuance.

Excellent idea to throw into the mix!!

 

[AG31]

Reply to page 3 of this thread...

ARRRGGHHH!!!!!!!

 

[onehitwanda]

hypotenuse.

Hey. Don't be rude about hypotenuses. They're the apex predator in Africa and they lack any sense of humor whatsoever.

 

[StillStunned]

Hey. Don't be rude about hypotenuses. They're the apex predator in Africa and they lack any sense of humor whatsoever.

But they're easy to escape from. Just don't run away in a straight line.

 

[onehitwanda]

But they're easy to escape from. Just don't run away in a straight line.

It's the straight lions you've got to really watch out for - they're all in de Nile.

I am so sorry

 

[StillStunned]

I am so sorry

No you're not. You're smirking to yourself.