Feeling rusty after a few years away...

[Scandilove]

Hello

I'm easing back into my writing after a pretty tumultuous few years during which I barely wrote anything. Feeling very rusty but know how supportive this community can be. Would really appreciate any feedback on either/both of my chapters. Ch1 was posted here a few years ago. Ch2 posted a few days ago. Thanks!

https://www.literotica.com/s/queens-gambit-ch-01
https://www.literotica.com/s/queens-gambit-ch-02

 

[yukonnights]

I've read chapter 1 and left a comment. I enjoyed your style and found it very intimate and close. I'll read part two and give you my thoughts.

 

[yukonnights]

Just finished your second chapter. The gap in publishing didn't seem to interfere with you picking things up where you left off in 2016. I don't have any negative critique on this. The one thing that comes to mind is; I think this story would have fit better in the Fetish category instead of Erotic Couplings. The "kinks" in this story were probably unexpected for those reading in the EC stories.

All I can add is that I hope you can get back into your writing routine. Writing these stories is mainly a pass-time hobby. We all try our best, but in the end it's for our own enjoyment. Good luck, and maybe post Part 03 here when it goes live.

 

[Scandilove]

Just finished your second chapter. The gap in publishing didn't seem to interfere with you picking things up where you left off in 2016. I don't have any negative critique on this. The one thing that comes to mind is; I think this story would have fit better in the Fetish category instead of Erotic Couplings. The "kinks" in this story were probably unexpected for those reading in the EC stories.

All I can add is that I hope you can get back into your writing routine. Writing these stories is mainly a pass-time hobby. We all try our best, but in the end it's for our own enjoyment. Good luck, and maybe post Part 03 here when it goes live.

Thanks very much for taking the time to have a look, much appreciated. And I think you're right about the categorisation. Shall bear that in mind.