I'm back posting stories after being away from writing erotica for over a decade!

[TheOrangeGrove]

I'm very happy to be back writing erotica again and posting my stories to Literotica =) I'm quite proud of the series that I'm working on at the moment and would love some feedback! I'm aware of a small handful of typos that I will be fixing, but I would love to hear what people think about the writing overall. Any kind of constructive feedback is very much appreciated!

Just to let everyone know. It is an incest story involving a mother and her twin sons... as the title implies. But I have my own take on the whole thing, which I feel is quite unique. Let me know what you think! Thank you and much love!

https://www.literotica.com/s/a-busty-mom-and-her-twin-boys-ch-01

 

[Spoiled316]

Welcome back! I really love your latest stories. Hope you never stop writing them. Cheers!

 

[Comentarista82]

I'm very happy to be back writing erotica again and posting my stories to Literotica =) I'm quite proud of the series that I'm working on at the moment and would love some feedback! I'm aware of a small handful of typos that I will be fixing, but I would love to hear what people think about the writing overall. Any kind of constructive feedback is very much appreciated!

Just to let everyone know. It is an incest story involving a mother and her twin sons... as the title implies. But I have my own take on the whole thing, which I feel is quite unique. Let me know what you think! Thank you and much love!

https://www.literotica.com/s/a-busty-mom-and-her-twin-boys-ch-01

Welcome back. So long as you don't turn into "China Grove" (I'll likely loop that song while reading your tale), I'll give it a go. In fact, what the hell...I'll put on some Mandarin Orange Spice tea just for you.

 

[secretLace]

Welcome back. I just had a 5 year hiatus myself before plunging back in with new found energy. Ill give it a read. Is there anything in particual you want to have comments on?

 

[TheOrangeGrove]

Welcome back. I just had a 5 year hiatus myself before plunging back in with new found powers. Ill give it a read. Is there anything in particual you want to have comments on?

I guess writing style overall but in particular, the pacing. Most people who have commented an emailed me have said they love the pacing but a select few have had issues with it saying it’s way too slow. I prefer the slow burn, slow build up kind of thing, but maybe it’s too too slow? Hard for me to tell lol. But I very much appreciate you giving it a read!