Comments That Make Your Day

[SyleusSnow]

Recently got a great comment on an old story (For All of Us):

"THIS STORY is simply one of the best on Literotica. And the dialog is OUTSTANDING . Particularly, this last of the 3 parts. I found myself marveling several times that someone could compose dialog that good. Occasionally humorous also -- I chuckled."​

...and the next day came this one via email:

"Your writing style is excellent. Not just flailing body parts and body fluid; you build the story. Great work."​

Hmm... "Flailing body parts and fluid" could be a good name for a metal band. Or title of a halloween story.

 

[KeithD]

One form of nice compliment here is when a reader is methodically (and alphabetically) going through your list, favoriting and favorably commenting on about four stories a day. Not meaty comments but enough to show that they'd actually read the story.

 

[gordo12]

One form of nice compliment here is when a reader is methodically (and alphabetically) going through your list, favoriting and favorably commenting on about four stories a day. Not meaty comments but enough to show that they'd actually read the story.

They'd probably die of old age before getting through yours. That's a lot of stories

 

[KeithD]

They'd probably die of old age before getting through yours. That's a lot of stories

The reader is in the "F" section of my current account listing. I've wondered how far they will stick with it too. I just passed 300 stories in that account in the GM category. My first account, sr71plt, is past 1,000 stories total, over 850 in the GM category. That means I currently hold the #1 and #2 spots on the GM category production list.

 

[MajorRewrite]

Very positive comments on my new story in the Loving Wives category. I’m happily shocked! Maybe the LW trolls are losing their killer instinct.

This one from Anonymous was the best:

“Wow, it's been a while since a new, innovative LW story has been posted. All I can say in less than 10000 words is what can you possibly do as an encore? 5 stars without any reservations!”

 

[LilyWaters]

Recent comment:

"My husband sent me this story almost a month ago and I can’t get enough of it. Lily Waters, you have written a story that matches one of my deepest fantasies. Any woman of my age, and my age shall remain a secret, who says she has never thought about being with a young stranger on vacation is lying. This story has given me many joyful nights of self pleasure. My husband and I have incorporated the story into our role playing on more than one occasion, except the man in the story became a much younger lifeguard."

I'm blown away. How will I ever live up to this???? Should I just... retire from erotica now?

 

[ElectricBlue]

I'm blown away. How will I ever live up to this???? Should I just... retire from erotica now?

Don't be silly. Write more! If you're that good starting out, imagine what you'll be like when you finish .

 

[gordo12]

Very positive comments on my new story in the Loving Wives category. I’m happily shocked! Maybe the LW trolls are losing their killer instinct.

This one from Anonymous was the best:

“Wow, it's been a while since a new, innovative LW story has been posted. All I can say in less than 10000 words is what can you possibly do as an encore? 5 stars without any reservations!”

You got a LOT of nice comments there. I have to read the story now!

 

[gordo12]

Very positive comments on my new story in the Loving Wives category. I’m happily shocked! Maybe the LW trolls are losing their killer instinct.

This one from Anonymous was the best:

“Wow, it's been a while since a new, innovative LW story has been posted. All I can say in less than 10000 words is what can you possibly do as an encore? 5 stars without any reservations!”

I just finished it. Awesome story and so out there. I haven't seen the plot before so kudos for that. It got a 5* from me!

 

[gordo12]

Another nice comment this morning:

"Christmas ... Glad that everything turned out so so very right for everyone. Including the bad guy! Good read!"

 

[Djmac1031]

Thank you, Rosco:

"COMMENTS
RoscoTusker about 5 hours ago
The quiet, introspective sensuality of the story is very seductive… and quite different. There are stroke and poke stories all over this site, this is angling to be something much better. Listen to your muse."

 

[BiscuitHammer]

This was a review today, rather than a comment...

But it still made my day, so I'll share. For context, I've turned off Anonymous comments, to keep racists and incels off my wall.

Said review:

"DUMB IT DOWN, YOU INSUFFERABLE BASTARD! I COME ONTO THIS SITE TO FIND STORIES I CAN RUB ONE OUT TO BUT THEN YOUVE GOT OVERSIZED FUCKING NERDS SPEAKING IN KLINGON! I DIDNT COME ON HERE TO LEARN KLINGON! IM NOT INTERESTED IN LEARNING. FUCKING MAKE ME ORGASM WITHOUT THE BRAIN STUFF! I SHOULDN'T NEED TO KNOW ALL THESE DIFFERENT COLORS TO READ YOUR STORIES!

QUIT BEING BRAINY AND YOUR STORIES ARE GREAT! THEYRE HOT AND THE GIRLS ARE HOT NOW LEAVE MY BRAIN ALONG YOU FUCKING EGGHEAD LOSER!"
***
That... was... awesome.

I laughed, I felt great, I toasted myself with a tumbler of Lagavulin...

I'm assuming they're American, since there was no 'u' in the word 'colour'. And the poor punctuation leads me to suspect what generation they might belong to.

His problem with my stories was that he hates learning. He admits they're hot, until he needs to engage a part of his brain that isn't his amygdala or limbic system. Thinking thoughts equals libidoectomy.

*Kid Sheleen sag in chair* Ohhhhhh, it was good. It felt great. I got screamed at about a smart story.

Just wait until I start subliminally teaching him Dothraki or Dovazul...

Yes, my friends, that comment made my whole day.

 

[ElectricBlue]

Yes, my friends, that comment made my whole day.

Yep, that's worth framing .

 

[SimonDoom]

But it still made my day, so I'll share. For context, I've turned off Anonymous comments, to keep racists and incels off my wall.

Said review:

"DUMB IT DOWN, YOU INSUFFERABLE BASTARD! I COME ONTO THIS SITE TO FIND STORIES I CAN RUB ONE OUT TO BUT THEN YOUVE GOT OVERSIZED FUCKING NERDS SPEAKING IN KLINGON! I DIDNT COME ON HERE TO LEARN KLINGON! IM NOT INTERESTED IN LEARNING. FUCKING MAKE ME ORGASM WITHOUT THE BRAIN STUFF! I SHOULDN'T NEED TO KNOW ALL THESE DIFFERENT COLORS TO READ YOUR STORIES!

QUIT BEING BRAINY AND YOUR STORIES ARE GREAT! THEYRE HOT AND THE GIRLS ARE HOT NOW LEAVE MY BRAIN ALONG YOU FUCKING EGGHEAD LOSER!"
***
That... was... awesome.

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BiscuitHammer, that's fantastic. That's Hall of Fame comment good.

I've shared it before, but it was so good, and it was somewhat in that vein but even less literate, so I'll share this one I once received that really made me laugh:

"Bad Very Bad
Regardless of what some these people say this was an extremely bad story im not going to tell you what i think you want to hear to try and be nice and not hurt your feelings my 5 Year old niece can write a better story then this it was so bad i hope this was your only story cause i tell you if not you should stop posting them before you ruin this site i wished i was blind and couldn't read that's how bad it is tell you what you want to learn to write an actual decent story take writing classes about 100 times a week no scratch that not even that will help you write a decent story do us all a favor and quit just completely forget how to write"

 

[BiscuitHammer]

Back before I turned off Anonymous comments, I had one Pakled who reviewed my Time Rider story. All he said was...

"WHAT AN AWFUL DAY TO BE ABLE TO READ!"

I mean, I don't blame people if they can't quite follow my Pulp Fiction-style temporal mechanics in TR, but my man just gave up on reading entirely.

I made him give up reading. So I pounded out another chapter of Time Rider the following day. Because I'm helpful and obliging that way, y'know?

But still, Ranty McRantRant about the Klingon remains my fave endorsement to date.

Never despair of writing based on negative comments, folks. Simon, Blue and I survive them. Hell, I'll bet even Chloe gets them once in a blue moon.

To paraphrase Ivan Drago in Rocky IV: "I WRITE FOR ME!!!"

Never need more than that. Reach for that perverted moon.

 

[BiscuitHammer]

"Bad Very Bad
Regardless of what some these people say this was an extremely bad story im not going to tell you what i think you want to hear to try and be nice and not hurt your feelings my 5 Year old niece can write a better story then this it was so bad i hope this was your only story cause i tell you if not you should stop posting them before you ruin this site i wished i was blind and couldn't read that's how bad it is tell you what you want to learn to write an actual decent story take writing classes about 100 times a week no scratch that not even that will help you write a decent story do us all a favor and quit just completely forget how to write"

Simon, if that illiterate and barely comprehensible verbal Hershey-squirt doesn't turn you off writing, I'd say you're on the correct path, good sir. When the linguistically challenged are snarling at you, you've done the Lord's work, make no mistake.

And how does he know his 5 year old niece writes better erotica than you?

Questions best left unanswered, I s'pose.

 

[LilyWaters]

But it still made my day, so I'll share. For context, I've turned off Anonymous comments, to keep racists and incels off my wall.

Said review:

"DUMB IT DOWN, YOU INSUFFERABLE BASTARD! I COME ONTO THIS SITE TO FIND STORIES I CAN RUB ONE OUT TO BUT THEN YOUVE GOT OVERSIZED FUCKING NERDS SPEAKING IN KLINGON! I DIDNT COME ON HERE TO LEARN KLINGON! IM NOT INTERESTED IN LEARNING. FUCKING MAKE ME ORGASM WITHOUT THE BRAIN STUFF! I SHOULDN'T NEED TO KNOW ALL THESE DIFFERENT COLORS TO READ YOUR STORIES!

QUIT BEING BRAINY AND YOUR STORIES ARE GREAT! THEYRE HOT AND THE GIRLS ARE HOT NOW LEAVE MY BRAIN ALONG YOU FUCKING EGGHEAD LOSER!"
***
That... was... awesome.

I laughed, I felt great, I toasted myself with a tumbler of Lagavulin...

I'm assuming they're American, since there was no 'u' in the word 'colour'. And the poor punctuation leads me to suspect what generation they might belong to.

His problem with my stories was that he hates learning. He admits they're hot, until he needs to engage a part of his brain that isn't his amygdala or limbic system. Thinking thoughts equals libidoectomy.

*Kid Sheleen sag in chair* Ohhhhhh, it was good. It felt great. I got screamed at about a smart story.

Just wait until I start subliminally teaching him Dothraki or Dovazul...

Yes, my friends, that comment made my whole day.

This made me laugh very, very hard. Honestly, I'd frame it.

Like, I can't guarantee that I won't print it out and frame it just for myself. And it's not even for me!

 

[BiscuitHammer]

This made me laugh very, very hard. Honestly, I'd frame it.

Like, I can't guarantee that I won't print it out and frame it just for myself. And it's not even for me!

Hey, feel free. I was just the inspiration for this synaptically-impaired genius and his sublime rant. Who am I to deny his talent to the world?

 

[Bramblethorn]

"DUMB IT DOWN, YOU INSUFFERABLE BASTARD! I COME ONTO THIS SITE TO FIND STORIES I CAN RUB ONE OUT TO BUT THEN YOUVE GOT OVERSIZED FUCKING NERDS SPEAKING IN KLINGON! I DIDNT COME ON HERE TO LEARN KLINGON! IM NOT INTERESTED IN LEARNING. FUCKING MAKE ME ORGASM WITHOUT THE BRAIN STUFF! I SHOULDN'T NEED TO KNOW ALL THESE DIFFERENT COLORS TO READ YOUR STORIES!

QUIT BEING BRAINY AND YOUR STORIES ARE GREAT! THEYRE HOT AND THE GIRLS ARE HOT NOW LEAVE MY BRAIN ALONG YOU FUCKING EGGHEAD LOSER!"

 

[BiscuitHammer]

I'm amused by the colour rant. I'm making him think about colours. One of my characters has tetrachromacy, so she sees a lot more colours than the rest of us. I guess Karen mentioning them got him angry.

He's gonna fucking DIE of neuron overload when I introduce Solresol in a bit... XD

 

[Panty Wrangler]

This one is definitely one of the best I've gotten so far. Very positive and genuinely helpful.

Ok, I’ll start with the important stuff. I gave you 5 stars! Good luck in the contest.

I really like mistaken identity incest stories and you did a masterful job setting this one up. The situation was very plausible and the sexual maneuvers were reasonable in their costumes.

I didn’t like that the son got weepy at the revelation. I like my men more masculine than that. Of course, I’d probably be the coed under the husband’s desk, so maybe I’m not the best judge!

Lastly, look up “head hopping” at the link below. The inner dialogue of both characters did move your narrative forward, but it’s a technical no-no.

https://www.louiseharnbyproofreader...pping-and-is-it-spoiling-your-fiction-writing

Again, I hope you get as lucky as Simon did in the contest!

 

[NoJo]

This one is definitely one of the best I've gotten so far. Very positive and genuinely helpful.

That link was very useful, and made me double-check my own writing!

 

[MillieDynamite]

That link was very useful, and made me double-check my own writing!

I saw another issue in the first example, it has two peoples thoughts in one paragraph. Switching point of view inside a paragraph is an enormous NO, NO, Nanette.

 

[Panty Wrangler]

I saw another issue in the first example, it has two peoples thoughts in one paragraph. Switching point of view inside a paragraph is an enormous NO, NO, Nanette.

Yeah, that was particularly jarring wasn’t it? I assume it was done to drive home the point.

I’ve got this crazy notion, misguided I’m sure, to write story drafts as two columns (when two characters are present); one from A’s perspective and the other from B’s. That way I can let my mind go where it will imagining the encounter. Later I’d condense by selecting one character’s voice for the whole encounter and mining the other column for the outward evident actions of the other. Probably way too much work…

 

[MillieDynamite]

Yeah, that was particularly jarring wasn’t it? I assume it was done to drive home the point.

I’ve got this crazy notion, misguided I’m sure, to write story drafts as two columns (when two characters are present); one from A’s perspective and the other from B’s. That way I can let my mind go where it will imagining the encounter. Later I’d condense by selecting one character’s voice for the whole encounter and mining the other column for the outward evident actions of the other. Probably way too much work…

You can switch through two or even three people but more than that it gets tricky.