Comments That Make Your Day

[gordo12]

It lacked...something.

and added one line. It was, (excepting the stand alone I did for the Covid event) literally the last words I wrote in the series.

In their letter, on a long list of their favorite things about the series, the reader only specified one particular line that really touched them.

It was that last line.

Yeah, that made my day. It may have made my month.

As EB said, Magical!

 

[gordo12]

I really liked this one and a couple of others on the same story. It was my first effort to work breadcrumbs up to a grand finale.

I mean this with heavy compliments in mind, this story read like a Hallmark Channel Holiday Movie. I could easily see it there getting top ratings in 2021 (Well, without the sex anyway). This story is about the emotions and the journey to be together and a happy ending. All of which overcame concerns I had about the length of time involved with the filming, the lack of finalizing Becky’s position being permanent or the strange reason why Caroline was teasing Chris in bed in the morning. But the phone call moment where everything g was put on the table was worth it. Well done. I look forward to reading more of your stories.

 

[GinnyPPC]

I received an email the other day from a reader who wanted to tell me how much they enjoyed my Mary and Alvin series, and asked several questions about the series and a few other things I've written.

I wrote back thanking them, and answering their questions. In reply yesterday I got a long email telling me everything they liked about Mary and Alvin. If I shared it here, it would spoil just about every major plot point.

I was very flattered by their enthusiasm for what I had created, but there was one thing in particular that made my day.

In 36 chapters of the series, over three years of writing, there was only one scene that I truly had trepidation about including. I wrote and rewrote that scene, and never felt it was just right. I knew that it would be upsetting to many readers, and I wasn't sure that I was conveying what I intended in a way they would not reject. It lacked...something.

Nonetheless, I included the scene. When I was doing about the fifth read through of that last chapter, just before I submitted, I stopped on that scene, and added one line. It was, (excepting the stand alone I did for the Covid event) literally the last words I wrote in the series.

In their letter, on a long list of their favorite things about the series, the reader only specified one particular line that really touched them.

It was that last line.

Yeah, that made my day. It may have made my month.

Very nice. Congrats!

 

[SimonDoom]

Just yesterday I received a really nice comment to my recent story Unwitting Porn Star Wife.

He said he'd been looking for a story like mine, and how he found it! In addition to being complimentary, the comment was special because the commenter was a long-time Literotica author whose own work I had read years ago, and whose stories about wives and exhibitionism influenced me. There's a nice feeling of coming full circle with a comment like that.

 

[LilyWaters]

I received an email the other day from a reader who wanted to tell me how much they enjoyed my Mary and Alvin series, and asked several questions about the series and a few other things I've written.

I wrote back thanking them, and answering their questions. In reply yesterday I got a long email telling me everything they liked about Mary and Alvin. If I shared it here, it would spoil just about every major plot point.

I was very flattered by their enthusiasm for what I had created, but there was one thing in particular that made my day.

In 36 chapters of the series, over three years of writing, there was only one scene that I truly had trepidation about including. I wrote and rewrote that scene, and never felt it was just right. I knew that it would be upsetting to many readers, and I wasn't sure that I was conveying what I intended in a way they would not reject. It lacked...something.

Nonetheless, I included the scene. When I was doing about the fifth read through of that last chapter, just before I submitted, I stopped on that scene, and added one line. It was, (excepting the stand alone I did for the Covid event) literally the last words I wrote in the series.

In their letter, on a long list of their favorite things about the series, the reader only specified one particular line that really touched them.

It was that last line.

Yeah, that made my day. It may have made my month.

What a great story. I love it.

 

[gordo12]

Well, someone made my day. He read 7 stories overnight and left a string of compliments and followed me.

I love this dig. 5 stars for an invigoratingly new perspective.

(I think dig should have been dog seeing as how it was a story about a dog)

Yeah, see? That's why I hate most cuck stories. Cause they're kind of just like that. 5 stars

OK. Yeah that ending floored me. Very well written. Gave you another 5 Stars.

Best line: "I couldn't believe that woman's ambidexterity. " 5 Stars.

Nice save on that one. I was really worried for him for a minute there. Loved it. 5 stars

Well, that was BeaUtiful!!

I'm not sure I bought the BF bailing on him? BUT I gave you 5 stars because that was the BEST twist I've seen in a long time.

 

[Thefireflies]

I’ve had a few comments encouraging me to keep writing. Not writing anything specific like some commenters like to do, but simply to keep publishing stories on Lit. That’s a pretty nice endorsement.

 

[TadOverdon]

I enjoyed this recent feedback:

So i just have to ask, did you purposely write Claire as a complete and total moronic airhead, eager to be groomed as a corporate whore. Or as the the whoreish avenging angel that is concerned about clearing her son's name and getting him out of prison.

I don't know, I believe I was shooting for "complete and total high-functioning airhead." Useful feedback, there.

It seems that a high end lawyer like herself could be doing more than getting minor plastic surgeries, getting multiple orgasms by servants, and getting gangbanged, by helping her son out.

I take exception to the description of her procedures as "minor."

But than again, narcissists like her, and Herb, and Simone and Burke will always put their own pleasures before anybody else's well being.

Yeah, duh.

My job is done.

I did post a polite, short comment in response. I'll be intrigued to see if it gets approved.

 

[gordo12]

I’ve had a few comments encouraging me to keep writing. Not writing anything specific like some commenters like to do, but simply to keep publishing stories on Lit. That’s a pretty nice endorsement.

Nice. If you feel like sharing some please do.

I enjoyed this recent feedback:



I don't know, I believe I was shooting for "complete and total high-functioning airhead." Useful feedback, there.



I take exception to the description of her procedures as "minor."



Yeah, duh.

My job is done.

I did post a polite, short comment in response. I'll be intrigued to see if it gets approved.

That was funny. There is no approval process for the comments. It's only spam links they check for despite what they call it.

 

[SimonDoom]

I enjoyed this recent feedback:



I don't know, I believe I was shooting for "complete and total high-functioning airhead." Useful feedback, there.



I take exception to the description of her procedures as "minor."



Yeah, duh.

My job is done.

I did post a polite, short comment in response. I'll be intrigued to see if it gets approved.

Makes me think of this:

https://memegenerator.net/instance/50086407/cocky-debater-jane-you-ignorant-slut

 

[TadOverdon]

Makes me think of this:

https://memegenerator.net/instance/50086407/cocky-debater-jane-you-ignorant-slut

LOL...

 

[lovecraft68]

Got one a couple days ago on "How do we look, baby"

"best burn the bastard story ever!"

seeing my intent was just that to piss off the burn the bitch scumbags, it made me smile.

 

[gordo12]

New one last night. (Turned the voting off a couple of years ago after a troll knocked it down 23 points over a month.)

Incredibility interesting! I would give it 5 but it looks like you turned that off. I think the transition scene from Mallory to angel was a little rough. Not sure why but Luci revealing he knew just seemed a little rough. However, I loved it. Wonderful job.

 

[gordo12]

A new one last night. Sept seems to have brought out the commenters.

Thank you , I really enjoyed that .

 

[MillieDynamite]

Azranger4729 days ago
Tags earn it an unread *1.

I liked this comment, why? Good question, because it shows just how stupid some people are. Voting a one based on the tags of a story and not reading the story, a, how lazy is this guy? b, what earns a person a right to vote on something they didn't read?

by Anonymous user on 06/24/2021
I really liked the concept and presention of this work. It is also one of the limited number of submissions on Literotica in which the author demonstrates a good grasp of the english language, spelling and grammar.

This comment made my day, can't tell you why, it just did.

 

[gordo12]

Quote:
by Anonymous user on 06/24/2021
I really liked the concept and presention of this work. It is also one of the limited number of submissions on Literotica in which the author demonstrates a good grasp of the english language, spelling and grammar.

This comment made my day, can't tell you why, it just did..

Cause it's a great comment!

 

[Djmac1031]

A few of my favourites:

"This is a HORRIBLE story, full of people doing HORRIBLE things to one another for HORRIBLE reasons! Five stars."

Lol. I've only recently begun writing here but I had a comment similar in that I wasn't quite sure if it was a compliment or an insult:

"Anonymous11 days ago
We find out he's married which makes him a cheating asshole. Then we find his wife a slut and he's a disgusting excuse for a man setting up other men to fuck her. Noone to like in this well written exposition of low life pond scum."

 

[ElectricBlue]

Lol. I've only recently begun writing here but I had a comment similar in that I wasn't quite sure if it was a compliment or an insult:

"Anonymous11 days ago
We find out he's married which makes him a cheating asshole. Then we find his wife a slut and he's a disgusting excuse for a man setting up other men to fuck her. Noone to like in this well written exposition of low life pond scum."

"Well written exposition of low life pond scum" means you brought the characters to life so well that your anon could hate them with even more passion. I'd say that's a, "Well done!" in an ass-backwards kind of way.

 

[SimonDoom]

Just got this one, for my story Penis Fish. It got my attention.

"Interesting until your rampant self loathing and lack of imagination killed the ending."

 

[gordo12]

Just got this one, for my story Penis Fish. It got my attention.

"Interesting until your rampant self loathing and lack of imagination killed the ending."

LOL, you have a strange way of having your day made Simon.

 

[SimonDoom]

LOL, you have a strange way of having your day made Simon.

I'm twisted. That's why I'm here, Gordo!

 

[gordo12]

I'm twisted. That's why I'm here, Gordo!

Preaching to the choir here. I think we're all a little warped...

 

[Panty Wrangler]

The best I've gotten so far is from another author - and it was for a story idea, does that count?

"You are a seriously disturbed individual.

I like it."

 

[ElectricBlue]

Just got this one, for my story Penis Fish. It got my attention.

"Interesting until your rampant self loathing and lack of imagination killed the ending."

It's fascinating the number of folk who appear to have qualifications in psycho-therapy around here.

And you gave the guy penis fish, for fucks sake, and that's still not good enough? Sheesh .

 

[LAHomedog]

I rarely get comments for some reason but got an email today where the reader was dictating to me how the next part of the story should go beat by beat.

I'd rather be Tom Jones in his prime and have panties throw at me on the stage. Now that would be good feedback!