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got so busy writing my next chapter of Doretta's mistake ch02 that I don't have time to do the reviews today I will do them tomorrow sorry folks. Severusmax said he would try to get a couple in today for me
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Thank you
SevrusMax for your review and kind words about Red Line Curls. While I have seen a lot of different things on the Red Line this trip, the subject of the story was actually an attractive woman with curly hair that I caught a glimpse of from behind while waiting for the Metro.
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SevrusMax for your review and kind words about Red Line Curls. While I have seen a lot of different things on the Red Line this trip, the subject of the story was actually an attractive woman with curly hair that I caught a glimpse of from behind while waiting for the Metro.
DA : )
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It means pissed off, sirhugs.sirhugs said:
janiexx, thanks for the words on Katy Kisses. It means a great deal. I wrote the piece in response to a Lit lesbian's comments about men not being able to write a sensitive scene.
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geronimo_appleby said:janiexx, thanks for the words on Katy Kisses. It means a great deal. I wrote the piece in response to a Lit lesbian's comments about men not being able to write a sensitive scene.
Well, you certainly did it for me! I'm a big fan of sensitive emotional stories and Katy Kisses certainly hit the spot!
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Sorry about not doing the reviews last night, but I was wiped out after a day of Christmas shopping and celebrating my gf/slave's birthday. Actually, since it was her birthday, she had a Domme day, so she wasn't my slave that day. It was a special deal where she got to be in charge for a day.
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SEVERUSMAX said:
I so suck... I haven't done them in weeks... and I think I'm gonna officially step down (again... sheesh) and just do them when I can... Maybe it's just the holidays, but I'm just swamped lately and can barely keep up with the boards let alone read stories...
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sirhugs said:
Not THAT kind of adventures, lol. There was a KID present! Even if there wasn't, my landlady was there and her daughter. They don't do orgies (a pity with her 22 year old- she's a regular BBW).
Hey, Selena, thanks for understanding. I can see how it would be a problem.
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On Pretty Baby
Thank you, Janie, for your glowing reviews on my first novel to be published here on Lit. You've encouraged my writing as a whole with your appreciation of the story of Alyssa.
I certainly wouldn't mind having it published in the mainstream, but I think I would have to tone down some of the graphic sexual depictions a bit. but who knows? Besides, just how would I go about contacting a publisher?
Anywho, thanks again, and to everyone else who has commented on Pretty Baby.
Slyc
Thank you, Janie, for your glowing reviews on my first novel to be published here on Lit. You've encouraged my writing as a whole with your appreciation of the story of Alyssa.
I certainly wouldn't mind having it published in the mainstream, but I think I would have to tone down some of the graphic sexual depictions a bit. but who knows? Besides, just how would I go about contacting a publisher?
Anywho, thanks again, and to everyone else who has commented on Pretty Baby.
Slyc
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sirhugs said:
She's got a boyfriend and a bad previous experience with swinging. No dice. Too bad, though. She's hot.
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sirhugs said:
Maybe, but I doubt it. Plus she has her mother reinforcing the whole monogamy thing. Tempting thought, but with her negative experience and her upbringing, I don't see it happening.
Of course, if I were evil....blackmail would be an option. Worse luck, I'm not evil enough for that.
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sirhugs said:
Nothing....yet.
But I'm not evil enough to blackmail someone to simply get her in the sack. Especially if she is attached. I'm a law-abiding citizen, after all.
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sirhugs said:
That would take a lot of persuasion, especially with someone who has been burned before with the whole swinging thing. I don't do the cheating thing, so that leaves it at the realm of pure fantasy. But it could make for a nice story, lol.
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SEVERUSMAX said:That would take a lot of persuasion, especially with someone who has been burned before with the whole swinging thing. I don't do the cheating thing, so that leaves it at the realm of pure fantasy. But it could make for a nice story, lol.
"Friendly Persuasion" might be the title....
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sirhugs said:
Good idea, thanks. Sadly, not all of the women that I find attractive are swingers like me. I like the name for the story, though.
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