Comments/Suggestions on the New Story Review Thread

[janiexx]

Just one month til the BIG DAY, fellow elves....then we party!

Arrggghhhh! Why did you have to remind me??

But, thank you for the review, Sirhugs, and I have to agree with your comments, as always.

janiexx

 

[rgraham666]

Oop. Sorry folks.

Slipped out of the time stream again and forgot it was Friday.

Sigh. I've got to find someway too reattach myself.

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

Oop. Sorry folks.

Slipped out of the time stream again and forgot it was Friday.

Sigh. I've got to find someway too reattach myself.

I have these cuffs.

 

[rgraham666]

I have these cuffs.

So we can cuff ourselves together?

I can live with that.

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

So we can cuff ourselves together?

I can live with that.

Yeppers. I can too.

 

[sirhugs]

Arrggghhhh! Why did you have to remind me??

But, thank you for the review, Sirhugs, and I have to agree with your comments, as always.

janiexx

but the AH Elfin Workshop always has the biggest orgy...errr...party

 

[janiexx]

but the AH Elfin Workshop always has the biggest orgy...errr...party

Really?...

Well, I'd better go and dig out my elf costume then...

janie xx

 

[Pegasus_Flying]

Oops

I incorrectly posted the following request in the review thread. Thank you Sir Hugs for pointing out my error..

I realize that I may be putting my head on the chopping block but, I'd appreciate a review of my 11/23/06 story, "Sara, Diane...and Tony..Chop away...lol...

http://english.literotica.com/stori...y.php?id=283251


Phil (aka Pegasus_Flying)

 

[slyc_willie]

but the AH Elfin Workshop always has the biggest orgy...errr...party

Oh, hey! Wonder if Trish will be there . . . .

(Sorry. Shameless plug)

 

[Selena_Kitt]

I will be out a while (check this post to see why) ... a week or more maybe... can someone do Tuesday reviews for a week or two?

Thanks...

 

[RogueLurker]

I will be out a while (check this post to see why) ... a week or more maybe... can someone do Tuesday reviews for a week or two?

Thanks...

I can try to do some later on Tuesday if nobody else gets there first.

take care ...

 

[Selena_Kitt]

I can try to do some later on Tuesday if nobody else gets there first.

take care ...

Thanks, Rogue.

 

[sirhugs]

I will be out a while (check this post to see why) ... a week or more maybe... can someone do Tuesday reviews for a week or two?

Thanks...

your will be with you

 

[sirhugs]

the review thread seems awfully clogged with Comments, so I bumped this!

 

[Decayed Angel]

Thank you Sirhugs

For the kind words and review of my story "Barandgrill"



DA : )

 

[angela146]

I have been reading new stories in an attempt to try to find some to review. As a general rule, I have decided not to review a story unless I give it at least a 4.

In other words, if I can't find good things to say, I won't say anything.

However...

I just had to share a paragraph with you from a story that I am not planning on reviewing. Can anyone guess why I stopped reading after this paragraph?

I had gotten some leave from the Navy (I'm an Intelligence Specialist 3rd Class, stationed in San Diego, CA), and came elk hunting with him. I had just gotten a new rifle, too. A Benelli R1 semi-automatic in .300 Winchester Magnum caliber, equipped with a 4.5-14x40 Zeiss Scope. Sighted in at 300 yards, and ready to go.

 

[SweetWitch]

janiexx
Really Experienced Join Date: Sep 2005
Location: UK
Posts: 262

Monday Review.

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Working my way down the list of new stories today, I was overjoyed to see SweetWitch's NaNoWriMo story, so I seized upon it eagerly to review:


"Shelter From The Storm, Ch.01"

by SweetWitch

Romance

Well, I was hooked into this story right from the very beginning, and SweetWitch's writing had my pulse racing with anxiety as I followed her heroine, Carissa, into the raging snowstorm.

Superbly written, with tension building from the first line, this is a gripping read that I can't wait to continue. Her believeable characters are drawn beautifully and the situation Carissa finds herself in is truly frightening. As a mother of two children, I sympathised with the heroine and will be looking out for more in anticipation of what's going to happen next. Please don't keep us waiting too long!

A well-deserved "5" from me!

Janie,

You are too kind. Thank you so much.

I write to you from the frozen midwest where life has all but come to a stand-still. No power, no heat, no computer. I will try to get the rest of the story out as soon as possible.

Thank you again for your wonderful review.

 

[janiexx]

Janie,

You are too kind. Thank you so much.

I write to you from the frozen midwest where life has all but come to a stand-still. No power, no heat, no computer. I will try to get the rest of the story out as soon as possible.

Thank you again for your wonderful review.

You're very welcome!

Can we have some of your weather? It's mild and windy here and I would really like to experience some interesting conditions

Not sure about the lack of heat or computer though...

Looking forward to the next instalment.

janiexx

 

[Black Tulip]

...
Can we have some of your weather? It's mild and windy here and I would really like to experience some interesting conditions
...

Send some to the continent as well, please!
We're having new records every week ... for highest temperature ever.

Grey, wet and clammy.

 

[Trombonus]

So, how does one get reviewed? Is it just luck?

 

[janiexx]

So, how does one get reviewed? Is it just luck?

Hello,

For me, it's whether a story that comes out on my particular day (Monday), seizes my attention and keeps it.

I'll be the first to admit that I review stories I personally like which, in some people's opinion, may restrict the categories I include. But, I can't see the point in reviewing a story that I didn't enjoy and wouldn't find anything good to recommend.

I never realised that reviewing stories takes so long and is such hard work so credit where credit's due to the reviewers who have been doing it for far longer than me. Why do all that reading and writing for something you didn't enjoy?

But everyone is welcome to include a review - Volunteers Welcome! - and if you see a good story to recommend, include it in the official thread.

It's the one thing we writers crave - feedback.

janiexx

 

[SweetWitch]

You're very welcome!

Can we have some of your weather? It's mild and windy here and I would really like to experience some interesting conditions

Not sure about the lack of heat or computer though...

Looking forward to the next instalment.

janiexx

THE POWER'S BACK!!!! A million happy dancin' nanas!!!! Now, what to do with all these one-bombs.

(Trust me, you DON'T want these conditions.)

 

[SweetWitch]

Send some to the continent as well, please!
We're having new records every week ... for highest temperature ever.

Grey, wet and clammy.

Are you sure you want it? I have been sleeping on the couch, maintaining the fire on the hearth, and making smoke rings with the steam that I breathe out. This morning it was 4 degrees F outside and 34 inside with the fire. The hot water bottle in the kitty's bed froze in the other room.

 

[oggbashan]

Apologies from Og

I have a new story posted - the second part of Shift Swap.

Please do NOT embarrass me by reviewing it. Both parts were written in a hurry for a new Yahoo adult group because there were no stories in their files. I have posted them on Lit because that way I won't lose them if the Yahoo group gets deleted.

These stories, like several of my fetish ones, are intended for limited audiences who are fairly uncritical IF their particular kink is included. They are potboilers, not serious works of art.

Apologies to anyone who reads them expecting more than I intended.

Og

 

[Selena_Kitt]

I have a new story posted - the second part of Shift Swap.

Please do NOT embarrass me by reviewing it. Both parts were written in a hurry for a new Yahoo adult group because there were no stories in their files. I have posted them on Lit because that way I won't lose them if the Yahoo group gets deleted.

These stories, like several of my fetish ones, are intended for limited audiences who are fairly uncritical IF their particular kink is included. They are potboilers, not serious works of art.

Apologies to anyone who reads them expecting more than I intended.

Og

Are you using reverse psychology, Og?