ElectricBlue
Joined 11 Years Ago
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- May 10, 2014
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This is my favourite story of yours, the whimsical mood is spot on, and it's sexy. It's got a genuine feel to it, too, which your penguin stories don't.This story is a good example of why I don't fret over scores too much. It was one of my favorites to write. It has a whimsical quality with elements of magic, and I think those elements are part of what turned off some readers to it, causing the score to drop. But I had fun and plenty of other readers seemed to have fun, so that's what matters.