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[ChromeCollar]

Hi there. I am returning back to this site and writing after a very long break. I've submitted my story but it was rejected once (the comments mentioned something about paragraphs) and I have fixed that and done a resubmit. That being said I am wondering if I can get an unbiased read of it. After nosing around and seeing some of the comments on my husbands recently submitted story I am concerned that it may be too dark for this site now. Things seem to be more pg-13 than r or xxx since the last time I was hear.

The story is a non-consent, it is incest between father and daughter. I am hoping for an honest feedback on whether I should try to publish on a less moderated site if this gets rejected again. Please be aware that it is DARK.

Thank you for any advice or help you may have to offer.

 

[Initiate_me]

I don't have any advice as such, but I'd be happy to cast a critical eye over the story, and offer feedback. I don't scare easily.

 

[ArdentHemingway]

I don't do "DARK", but otherwise I would read it.

One story of mine was rejected with the notation : We generally do not accept
submissions of nonconsensual sex in which the "victim" gets absolutely no sort of thrill
or enjoyment from the acts

Is that the case with your story?

 

[ChromeCollar]

Well... technically she isn't getting much pleasure in the first one but the second installment will be fire if I can get it there!

 

[ArdentHemingway]

Yeah, I think I read the first one. I have issues with it.

I could give the second one a look though.

You should be able to find me in the Editor Program.

 

[77fbird400]

Hi there. I am returning back to this site and writing after a very long break. I've submitted my story but it was rejected once (the comments mentioned something about paragraphs) and I have fixed that and done a resubmit. That being said I am wondering if I can get an unbiased read of it. After nosing around and seeing some of the comments on my husbands recently submitted story I am concerned that it may be too dark for this site now. Things seem to be more pg-13 than r or xxx since the last time I was hear.

The story is a non-consent, it is incest between father and daughter. I am hoping for an honest feedback on whether I should try to publish on a less moderated site if this gets rejected again. Please be aware that it is DARK.

Thank you for any advice or help you may have to offer.

I like dark stories, I would be willing to read it and give you some feedback.

No need to reciprocate, but I'm writing a story too. Its dark but has a bit of everything. I'm not planning to publish it at this time. I just like writing. Let me know if you're interested! It will either be called "Father Figure" or "Sanatorium"

 

[ChromeCollar]

They have kicked it back at me for a third time, which I find very discouraging. I do NOT understand the concept of having a non-consent category that doesn't allow non-consent stories.

I have absolutely tamed it down, and it was still rejected for the same reasons. It may as well not even be non-consent if I make any more changes. Why in the world would you read a nonconsensual story if you want to read about two people having consensual sex?

What's the point.

 

[ChromeCollar]

I like dark stories, I would be willing to read it and give you some feedback.

No need to reciprocate, but I'm writing a story too. Its dark but has a bit of everything. I'm not planning to publish it at this time. I just like writing. Let me know if you're interested! It will either be called "Father Figure" or "Sanatorium"

I would really enjoy reading your story, feel free to email it to

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if you would like. You can PM me your email also if you want to read mine. Let me know which version of it you want, as I keep having to tame it down. At this point it's barely pg-13.

 

[ChromeCollar]

Yeah, I think I read the first one. I have issues with it.

I could give the second one a look though.

You should be able to find me in the Editor Program.

Are you a moderator for the site? If so I would love to have a private conversation about why my story keeps getting kicked back.

 

[ArdentHemingway]

Nope, I am not, but I read "Unwilling" and it wasn't to my taste. However, I'm not as nasty as that commenter on 09/22/17 . It's your story and you can write what you like, I don't have to like it. And I've read "worse".

If your new story is in that same line, and not terribly long, I'm willing to give it an honest proofreading.

I do wonder though, whether or not the uncle had already had Genna.

 

[ChromeCollar]

Ah! Well thank you for your honesty. This is quite a bit darker than Unwilling. If that wasn't for you, this one definitely wont be I think. Would you like me to write a sequel to Unwilling to answer your curiosity?

 

[ChromeCollar]

ACTUALLY I just re-read Unwilling and I definitely lightened my new story up compared to that. At least the girl has an orgasm in this one.

 

[ArdentHemingway]

Ladies always come first.

If it's lighter than "Unwilling", but similar, I could give it a go.
I don't know that I could suggest changes to get it approved though.

I could send you a copy of my "Bigfoot Gang Rape" story which was rejected for comparison.
Or check out the ending of https://www.literotica.com/s/french-lessons-seduction

 

[ChromeCollar]

Ladies always come first.

If it's lighter than "Unwilling", but similar, I could give it a go.
I don't know that I could suggest changes to get it approved though.

I could send you a copy of my "Bigfoot Gang Rape" story which was rejected for comparison.
Or check out the ending of https://www.literotica.com/s/french-lessons-seduction

I would like to read that. If you want to exchange email addresses I can send this story over to you.

 

[77fbird400]

I would really enjoy reading your story, feel free to email it to Reminder:

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If it is a google doc, consider giving me commentor access so I can comment directly on the doc.

I'm going to check out your other stories, I think I may like them

 

[_Lynn_]

Are you a moderator for the site? If so I would love to have a private conversation about why my story keeps getting kicked back.

I'm a moderator here but you need to discuss your issues with the site owner, Laurel. Send her a (friendly) PM asking for clarification for the rejection.