What's Your Next Six Word Story?

[rawsilk]

A bottom offered, plump or not,
To light pain and soft caresses.
Willingly, lovingly, trustingly, is one thing.

i simply hate when men bluster,
Order around, threaten physically, or verbally,
For the sake of showing virility.

All I see, all it is,
Is the perpettuation, sadly to say,
Of the rape culture. Damn &%$&ers!

I'm apologize for the rant, friends.
There's too much of this sickness.
My heart bleeds, simply from empathy.

I move on to nicer things.
Let's talk, write, think, yea, dream,
Of a world where love's paramount.

I retreat to my inner universe,
Where women are revered, cherished, loved.
'Tis a far far better place.

6X3X6

An abusive man has lost control.
His display just dearth of manhood.
His manner betrays a low virility.

Rape shows a lack of power.
He's a weakling, coward, loser, creep.
Has nothing to do with sex.

It is sad to see women
Who are weaker than a man
Beaten, abused, victimized, no hiding place.

True Master sub relationship is protection.
Support, guidance, trust, being the aim.
Never ever any abuse or cruelty.

Nothing like a good hard spank.
To get the girl on fire.
Maybe this might look like violence.

For anyone who does not know.
Cuddles with arms tight around me
Trust me this is cherished love.

6X3X6

 

[AnAngelReally]

On the wings of mighty Pegasus,
I soar in search of love.
The sun shines on my back.
Our shadow outraces our swift flight
Even as we cleave the air,
The herald of our sacred quest.

I rein in my aerial steed.
Mine delicious prey lies there below.
This must be a dream, verily.
Yon maiden has shed every garnment.
There she lies, all but asleep,
Or so it doth truly seem.

Hardly a twitch as we land.
She opens a twinkling emerald eye.
"It took you long enough, buddy.
I'm nearly burned to a crisp."
"What mean thou? I prithee speak."
"Put this cream on me, please."

Flustered, I obey the gentle request.
A withering stare for the snorting,
Sniggering stallion, pracing, mane flailing about.
I should remonstrate upon his hilarity,
At my expense, once again. Beast!
But cannot be derelict. Oh no!

I apply, most thoroughly, yet lovingly,
Skills taught me by enchantress Melusine,
Feminine spirit of sparkling sacred springs.
Though 'tis a womanly thing surely,
The magical practise is most potent.
Otherworldly I'd say, this massage sorcery.

What a wondrous effect it generates!
Soft throaty noises, shivers all over.
Skin so soft, so very warm.
I apply myself, scented cream too.
She pushes back on my hands
Begging silently for more of same.

Her plump buttocks deserve my attention.
She squeals in delight as, playfully,
A slap makes a cheek jiggle.
Encouraged, I replicate the delightful action.
I caress... err... massage said bottom.
Can a woman's aroma change suddenly?

Impatiently, it doth seem to me,
On her back she flips suddenly.
"Do my front! Get to it!"
Gentlemanly, I comply with much alacrity.
The sorry excuse for equine laughs.
The instruction was worth the price.

Definitely approving noises in contented comment
As tension leaves her slender neck.
I avoid the most sensitive areas
As I caress, no more pretense,
Above, beside and below her mounds.
Inevitably, I reach the pointy peaks

An inordinate amount of time later...
What's an eternity between friends, hey?
I finally remember. There is more.
I rub it in, deeply, conscienciously,
Eyes fixed lower than my hands,
Breathing deeply, inhaling strongly. Oh, yummy!

I knead the ample tanned thighs.
Legs spread wide in unmistakable invitation.
I zero in on the target.
I circle it, push flesh inward.
Hold it between my splayed hands.
I press the exquisite essence out.

It really hurt my poor ears
When she grabbed them so roughly
To bring my face to her.
"I like this knight fantasy schtick
But eat me already, you tease."
"I live but to serve, milady."


12X6X6
Aaaaah! That feels better.
Sorry, I had to get it out of my system.

 

[AnAngelReally]

An abusive man has lost control.
His display just dearth of manhood.
His manner betrays a low virility.

Rape shows a lack of power.
...

For anyone who does not know.
Cuddles with arms tight around me
Trust me this is cherished love.

6X3X6

You're so right! My sentiments exactly!
Read my stories and you'll see.
Very well said, again, my friend.

PS: Spanking sparks this man too.

 

[rawsilk]

On the wings of mighty Pegasus,


It really hurt my poor ears
When she grabbed them so roughly
To bring my face to her.
"I like this knight fantasy schtick
But eat me already, you tease."
"I live but to serve, milady."


12X6X6

That is an hilarious last verse to a mighty poem! Made me laugh loudly!

12X6X6......Totally outclassed, I should live so long!

 

[AnAngelReally]

That is an hilarious last verse to a mighty poem! Made me laugh loudly!

12X6X6......Totally outclassed, I should live so long!

Told ya! I'm a story teller.
And a guy's gotta laugh too.

12X6X6, see? My problem is brevity.
Nowadays, I practise writing short stories.
They're only 4 or 5,000 words.

 

[rawsilk]

I enjoy controlling a man's ecstasy.
Eyes meeting for the first time.
His handsome face appealing to me.

Sending a clear message to him.
Through my eyes alone I spoke.
Come closer and speak with me.

Crossing the room, striding with grace.
He cautiously introduced himself, "I'm John".
Lovely name I said, "I'm Ann".

"John sounds like soft brown velvet".
"A name I have always liked".
He smiled gently at my words.

We move together to a table.
He offered me a corner seat.
Then seated himself close by me.

I asked him about his work.
I sat in quiet wrapped attention.
My blue eyes never leaving his.

I saw his interest rising quickly.
Asking would I like a drink.
"A red wine would be lovely".

Sipping slowly, lips caress the glass.
His choice was whiskey over ice.
He clearly saw I was interested.

We found both had similar interests.
Our intensity of conversation, binding us.
Nursing my drink, he did not.

Soon he got up whiskey courage.
Slipped his hand on my leg.
Then tried to slide up higher.

Whispered softly "not so soon John!"
"Although you have a lovely touch".
He did look a little disappointed.

The night was long, very romantic.
Then it was time to go.
Could he see me very soon?

I said I would be delighted.
He moved slightly closer to me.
A quick kiss on my lips.

I smiled softly as he guessed.
It would be quite a while.
Before his passion would be realized.

6X3X14

I need to acknowledge the first line to a kind and generous person who first suggested it as a story line. Totally set me on fire!

 

[AnAngelReally]

I enjoy controlling a man's ecstasy.
Eyes meeting for the first time.
His handsome face appealing to me.

...

I smiled softly as he guessed.
It would be quite a while.
Before his passion would be realized.

14X3X6 So you have lived so long.

Beautifully said.
You're a tease, a seductress.
You sure rock, RawSilk!

Oops, I confused the threads again.
Shoot, I'll have to watch that.
Think we can get Garry here?

 

[rawsilk]

14X3X6 So you have lived so long.


Think we can get Garry here?

Sure hope so! Maybe you could PM him....If I did he might misinterpret after this last work here from me!

 

[AnAngelReally]

Sure hope so! Maybe you could PM him....If I did he might misinterpret after this last work here from me!

I will, but why would he?
I write from a woman's POV all the time and my stories are all lesbian erotica.
I had to change my bio. It was too ambiguous. It made people uncomfortable.
So, I used 'The Man's Prayer' from the Red Green Show.
Why people are so stuck on rigid gender identity, I'll never know.
In fact I do know. That's what makes it so sad.

 

[rawsilk]

I will, but why would he?
I write from a woman's POV all the time and my stories are all lesbian erotica.
I had to change my bio. It was too ambiguous. It made people uncomfortable.
So, I used 'The Man's Prayer' from the Red Green Show.
Why people are so stuck on rigid gender identity, I'll never know.
In fact I do know. That's what makes it so sad.

No i simply mean he may think I am trying to chat him up in R/L.

 

[AnAngelReally]

No i simply mean he may think I am trying to chat him up in R/L.

Gotcha!

 

[AnAngelReally]

Games, games! Arghhh!

A woman loves to manipulate men

Seduction, she calls it. I laugh!
It's naught but aggression spelled differently.

A man's power trip is direct,
Simple as his mind can grasp
Only so little at a time.

'Tis not a an insult, truly.
Our reptilian brain was so sollicited
For so long, protecting the females,
Offspring too, providing, defending them both.

I sometimes wonder where evolution leads
In it's devious plan for us.
The Goddess shows her feminine aspect
As she toys with us so.
Still we love and worship them.

We kneel, abase our very selves
To the altar of their beauty
Within and without, truth be told.
They surprise us, they always do.
With a smile, a gentle word,
They reel us in, benighted souls.


1-2-3-4-5-6X6 What fun!

 

[rawsilk]

A woman loves to manipulate men

Seduction, she calls it. I laugh!
It's naught but aggression spelled differently.

My words were 'control his ecstasy'.
Which means make it more erotic.
Lift his delight to greater heights.

Quick wam bam, thank you ma'am.
Will never give him lasting memories.
Of bliss and deeply passionate nights.

Time to imagine what will be.
Plan things he has never done.
When he finally takes his prize.

'Manipulate' is worlds apart from 'control'.
Control is a gentle hand used.
On his lever, guiding him home.

Manipulate is cold, hard and selfish.
Taking for oneself with no consideration.
Of what would fulfill his needs.

3X5

 

[AverageGary]

I'm not really a poet, but I could give it a shot.
Just need a brief primer on what the numbers stand for so I can give it a shot

 

[rawsilk]

I'm not really a poet, but I could give it a shot.
Just need a brief primer on what the numbers stand for so I can give it a shot

G'day Gary good to see you back.

The numbers are a bit irrelevant

What this thread is about is writing a story in 6 words per line.

It can be just a single line as in ....

We walked a strange crooked mile.
1x6 one line of six words. It tells a short story as it stands


Or you can have three lines of 6 words
3x6

or 3 lines of 6 words 15 times
3 x 6x 15

Or just ignore the numbers totally as it was Angel and myself who started it i think.

it is a story in six words or a multiple of lines with six words per line. Can be a connected story or simply random six word stories. Hope all that makes sense! Write as many lines however you want. It really has no structure except the 6 words per line.

 

[AverageGary]

I'll need some time to think of something (and I have to go out soon) but I will be back with something.

 

[AnAngelReally]

My words were 'control his ecstasy'.
...

Control is a gentle hand used.
On his lever, guiding him home.

(What a choice euphemism that is.)

You sure have got that right.

My starting point was your ending:
"I smiled softly as he guessed.
It would be quite a while.
Before his passion would be realized."

You teased the poor deluded man
All evening long with implied promises
Then he realized they were false.

Some have a word for that.
I chose 'manipulate', it's more polite.

Control, manipulation. Potato, potahto, I say.

At least you admitted, though obliquely,
That you used his misguided hopes
To string him along, you tease.

Your words are admittedly more erotic
(You are the undisputed Mistress there)
But mine are no less accurate.

You used his pride and joy
(That expression always makes me laugh)
To get free food and drinks.

Good for you. Stuffed and sloshed.
All he got were blue balls.
Served him right for using them
Instead of thinking with his noggin.

He should have eaten his dessert
Before he untied you, hey Sheila?

 

[AnAngelReally]

See, Gary? There's no strict rule
Except the six words per line.

It's not even a true poem.

You can simply tell a story.
Funny or sexy. It doesn't matter.

Silk could make even engine repair
Sound erotic as hell, oh yeah!
I tell a story, that's all.

RawSilk is quite misleading, a misnomer.
PureSilk would be much more precise.
Her words threaten a diabetes flare
They're like honey for the mind.

Have fun! That's all that counts.

 

[AnAngelReally]

G'day Gary good to see you back.
...

or 3 lines of 6 words 15 times
3 x 6x 15

....

Actually, it's the numbers for Paragraph - Lines - Words.
Think about it. You go from bigger to smaller.
The inverse would be just as valid if less descriptive.

(A sexist joke would have been
Easy, so very easy, and funny,
To insert here. Sigh! I resisted)

So 15X3X6 means 15 paragraphs of 3 lines of 6 words.

Sorry for the logic. Science was my first advocation
If you read my stories, you'll see it still is important to me.

I'm a complex man. It's my feminine side poking through my thick hide.

 

[AnAngelReally]

Control of ecstasy revisited

I enjoy controlling a woman's ecstasy.
To take her, willingly, eagerly even,
To give herself, body and heart,
As I do, freely and passionately.

We fly together in shared delight
To a state of true emotion
So intense that we are truly
Carried beyond rational thought and self-control.

Flesh and soul, communion so profound,
So complete that it’s a mystery
Where we begin and actually end
Since we have become as one.

Pleasure, physical and spiritual, we exchange
Back and forth, to and fro.
Her kisses are mine, caresses too.
Culmination is only the obvious goal.

The long road we travel together
Is where love does so dwell
In all its glory of light.
In the bliss we partake, together.

And as we look back longingly
On this voyage, we do gaze
Into eyes still very much glazed
Only to smile, remembering and anticipating.


6X4X6

 

[rawsilk]

Actually, it's the numbers for Paragraph - Lines - Words.
Think about it. You go from bigger to smaller.
The inverse would be just as valid if less descriptive.

(A sexist joke would have been
Easy, so very easy, and funny,
To insert here. Sigh! I resisted)

So 15X3X6 means 15 paragraphs of 3 lines of 6 words.

Sorry for the logic. Science was my first advocation
If you read my stories, you'll see it still is important to me.

I'm a complex man. It's my feminine side poking through my thick hide.

See I told you I'm outclassed.
A sexist joke is my delight.
There's not a jot of feminism,

 

[AverageGary]

Forgive me for injecting some humor into this, turning my clean thought on the difficulty of six word lines (the first line here) into a humorous dirty story ...


This is harder than I thought
He said while holding his cock
I haven't taken my Viagra yet
But seeing her luscious naked body
seems to have cured my problem

 

[rawsilk]

You sure have got that right.

My starting point was your ending:
"I smiled softly as he guessed.
It would be quite a while.
Before his passion would be realized."

You teased the poor deluded man
All evening long with implied promises
Then he realized they were false.

Some have a word for that.
I chose 'manipulate', it's more polite.

Control, manipulation. Potato, potahto, I say.

At least you admitted, though obliquely,
That you used his misguided hopes
To string him along, you tease.

Your words are admittedly more erotic
(You are the undisputed Mistress there)
But mine are no less accurate.

You used his pride and joy
(That expression always makes me laugh)
To get free food and drinks.

Good for you. Stuffed and sloshed.
All he got were blue balls.
Served him right for using them
Instead of thinking with his noggin.

He should have eaten his dessert
Before he untied you, hey Sheila?

No No you have it wrong.
it's the fruit at the top.
Knowing which is his to pluck.

Takes time to climb the tree.
Knowing full well the highest fruit.
will always have the sweetest taste.

The few pence it may cost.
to wine and dine his lady.
will come back many, many fold.

 

[rawsilk]

Forgive me for injecting some humor into this, turning my clean thought on the difficulty of six word lines (the first line here) into a humorous dirty story ...


This is harder than I thought
He said while holding his cock
I haven't taken my Viagra yet
But seeing her luscious naked body
seems to have cured my problem

Bloody funny Gary, you nailed it.
It gets easier with some practice.
However Haiku can fark you up.
By making you count damn syllables.
Instead of a six word count.

 

[AverageGary]

I want sex now she said
Please please come to me now
He asked her where are you
I want to fulfill your wishes
I'm able to come to you
come on you, come in you
Just let me know your preference
I'm ready and able to make
all our lustful desires come true