legerdemer
lost at sea
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Thanks for the cheering on... now I have to finish!
				
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Thanks for the cheering on... now I have to finish!
Trix in your 1-29 you've encapsulated I don't know what it is but you have anyway!

Calli your 1-29 is beautiful and, to me, poignant. I want to read it with a period after "hide" and then drop down a line of space before "In that moment" starts the sentence. Just a thought but I love how this poem is simple but profound.
Calli your 1-29 is beautiful and, to me, poignant. I want to read it with a period after "hide" and then drop down a line of space before "In that moment" starts the sentence. Just a thought but I love how this poem is simple but profound.

Seconded
congrats Tod, first across the line
Lol, nope, well not yet at least, he's just finished #29, one more to go.
I lost count, saw the 29's from yesterday, then his today, grey today, looks like a good day to get drunk before noon.cheers
.. ditto! there was a strong association/reference/hint of Dandelion wine in that poem. intended or no?Yea Trix, way to go kid!
Congrats on finishing your latest 30/30 run, Trix. What a wonderful poem to finish up with.
Yea Trix, way to go kid!
.. ditto! there was a strong association/reference/hint of Dandelion wine in that poem. intended or no?

LOL not quite sure how to take that
Seconded



Take it that I liked it! I'm crap at critique that's why I haven't in the current challenge and very well done for finishing .... you rock

 
 
ETA: wtg Calli, nice run.
Congrats Calli! Here is your 60 poems badge.

For Trix and callie.....
Well done.

Thank you! It was almost like fun.
Hah! you wrote some good stuff, sometime it hurt to read because the emotion so quietly presented was so strong, not saying it correctly, hopefully someone will understand
congrats
