Upcoming Story Series: Law and Order (CMNF)

[Nephlim14]

For my first contribution to the site, I am planning on making a story series that is mainly about CMNF. Each chapter is meant to serve as a revenge sequel for every story I have read so far. The setting is about society worldwide deciding to crack down on "CFNM" crimes, under the influence of an ati sexist organization called "The Equalists". The characters will be from already existing stories, and, using refined versions of the "EJAX" drug, victims will become victors over their tormentors.

What do you guys think of it. I will post the various stories I'm basing my chapters on, and if anyone has ideas for the plot, please reply.

 

[OzoneRed]

Your post is a little ambiguous, but it could be interpreted as "I'm going to post other authors' stories, then post derivative works based on them." Both of which are, to put it mildly, impolite.

 

[Nephlim14]

Response

It's not like that. I'm not posting their own works. I read them, and I've been waiting a long time for them to make a sequel of them involving revenge. I got tired of waiting and decided to make a story series based on my idea of a sequel for the aforementioned stories.

 

[MyRubiLips]

I'm sure you'd have to obtain permission from the authors to use their characters, etc. Lit authors won't be covered under the disclaimer found in the Celeb category.

 

[Sean Renaud]

You've got a lot of snags here and I'm not completely sure how the technicalities work out but a lot of this is easy-ish to get around.

For the moment I'm going to defer to our amazing mod RubiLips but I'm less than certain that the same parody laws that protect you from Marvel wouldn't protect you from me. Regardless.

Asking permission first is simply the polite thing to do regardless of it's a legal necessity. There is a gulf between what's legal and what's right. I might be an atheist but the Golden Rule isn't a bad thing to go by regardless.

Even amongst the top stories on Lit, not everybody reads so you're unlikely to gather ire or readers by making a sequel of sorts to their work. Which is where my work around hits. For the sake of argument lets say you wanted to write about Harry Potter. (I never read the books or watched the movies. So no clue what his age formally is at the end nor how Lit would attempt to tackle it. For the sake of argument he's 19.) Well you can't because you don't own the rights. But J.K. Rowling doesn't own the rights to magic, or magic schools, or kids whisked away to magical adventures where they come of age. So you re name your leading man Kevin Kettle, the school Avalon and have your fun. What little you lose by way of not having the "brand" recognition you make up by having the flexibility to do what you want.

So that's my honest advice. Screw permission, just take the elements of the story you like make sure you change all the names, mix up a few locations and call it a day. Let's not pretend like the guys who made Pacific Rim didn't basically go "You know what I want to make Godzilla vs Power Rangers. But Toho and and Saban told me to fuck off. And I said I'll make my own movie! With black jack. And hookers.

You know what? Forget the black jack. . .

 

[MyRubiLips]

You've got a lot of snags here and I'm not completely sure how the technicalities work out but a lot of this is easy-ish to get around.

For the moment I'm going to defer to our amazing mod RubiLips but I'm less than certain that the same parody laws that protect you from Marvel wouldn't protect you from me. Regardless.

Asking permission first is simply the polite thing to do regardless of it's a legal necessity. There is a gulf between what's legal and what's right. I might be an atheist but the Golden Rule isn't a bad thing to go by regardless.

There was a story recently (it was in the NEW section a couple weeks back) where in reading the comments section it seems the person either "made a remake" of a Lit author's story without said aurhor's knowledge or permisson or they plagerized it and changed very little. Regardless, all of the "feedback" was about that and not "if the story was good".

Laurel pulled the story.

 

[MatthewVett]

There was a story recently (it was in the NEW section a couple weeks back) where in reading the comments section it seems the person either "made a remake" of a Lit author's story without said aurhor's knowledge or permisson or they plagerized it and changed very little. Regardless, all of the "feedback" was about that and not "if the story was good".

Laurel pulled the story.

How derivative do you have to be that your story is considered a remake? Geez. And I thought the same plots kept getting reused as it was.

 

[Sean Renaud]

My guess is you probably have to be pretty bad. I have a series called Starlets to Harlots that is a blatant and admitted rip off from another writer with zero permission and only a note at the beginning that this idea was not mine originally please support the official release!

Though rules only matter when you get caught so who knows. Still I think the easiest way around it is what I mentioned above. Change enough to get around it.

 

[MyRubiLips]

How derivative do you have to be that your story is considered a remake? Geez. And I thought the same plots kept getting reused as it was.

It sounds as though a great percentage of the story was copy/pasted. The original author had no clue.

 

[lovecraft68]

Because there are no stories here featuring female humiliation

Of course here on lit CFNM would be a crime worthy of revenge.

It doesn't matter that CFNM is a very small amount of stories on this site and that stories where women 'get theirs" have them outnumbered 250-1 if not more

But of course that injustice must be undone! We real men must have revenge! We cannot allow women to think there are stories where they are in control and we cannot allow men who are actually secure enough in their manhood that they enjoy stories with femdom aspects!

Yet another misogynistic idea from another little dicked loser who can't stand a woman being anything but either raped or a mindless cum dumpster.

 

[MyRubiLips]

Though rules only matter when you get caught so who knows. Still I think the easiest way around it is what I mentioned above. Change enough to get around it.

I'm sure this is a big part of it. The early bits of feedback started with the readers "thinking it was familiar" and then I guess some did a bit of digging.

 

[Sean Renaud]

I'm sure this is a big part of it. The early bits of feedback started with the readers "thinking it was familiar" and then I guess some did a bit of digging.

Considering how many stories contain the exact same plot, the limited number of commonly used English names you pretty much had to copy and paste for people to catch on to that kind of thing.

Which should be be removed. I'm 100% in agreement with that.

 

[Nephlim14]

Response

Because there are no stories here featuring female humiliation

Of course here on lit CFNM would be a crime worthy of revenge.

It doesn't matter that CFNM is a very small amount of stories on this site and that stories where women 'get theirs" have them outnumbered 250-1 if not more

But of course that injustice must be undone! We real men must have revenge! We cannot allow women to think there are stories where they are in control and we cannot allow men who are actually secure enough in their manhood that they enjoy stories with femdom aspects!

Yet another misogynistic idea from another little dicked loser who can't stand a woman being anything but either raped or a mindless cum dumpster.

1. I like CFNM stories as much as the next person, I even look for videos from the website from time to time, and I also plan on making a few CFNM stories along with this (but with friendlier females). However, I also believe in COMPLETE gender equality. After all, if a group of men did this to a woman, they would be in jail in seconds. With this in mind, I am trying make sequels where these women face punishment for their actions.

2. Do not confuse this as me trying to submit to your rash comment, I only write this message to express opinion. It's obvious you will just ignore this, or warp it into an insult of some kind, but whatever, I do not try to explain my actions to a person who would be so quick to cry "SEXISM" in such a rash fashion.

 

[Sean Renaud]

I disagree with LC on this subject. That said it is not a "quick" reaction. Variants on this story idea show up multiple times a week. They could practically make up their own genre and while yes there are non-con stories where a male is the victim they are a minority. Rating right up there with horror films where a crazed woman tracks down a bunch of kids at a campsite and eats them raw.