Obedience

[Stephanie4play]

Go on home folks there's nothing left to see.

 

[NomadLady]

Oh my, I can't wait until RJMasters reads this one...

 

[girlowned]

This is essentially a punishment given me by my Mistress, though I feel a little like brer rabbit in the briar patch for in obeying her I am at home in my submission. I am so full of Her presence right now that it nearly brings tears to my eyes. I feel fulfilled rather than punished.
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That is a great story about submission Stephanie. It shows your depth of submission and the depth of your feelings for your Mistress. i don't see how it is punishment for a wrong you did though. i hope your Mistress reads the words you yourself wrote above and realizes that it's not really a punishment. Having said that, thank you for sharing, i enjoyed your story.

 

[Stephanie4play]

That is a great story about submission Stephanie. It shows your depth of submission and the depth of your feelings for your Mistress. i don't see how it is punishment for a wrong you did though. i hope your Mistress reads the words you yourself wrote above and realizes that it's not really a punishment. Having said that, thank you for sharing, i enjoyed your story.

Thank you. My Mistress knows.

I'm glad that you enjoyed it.

 

[Duncan1981]

JESUS -Goes and smokes now-

 

[Lizzie_Borden]

I don't get it.

How's posting wank material a punishment?



There's several threads going on about obedience and whatnot if you actually want to *talk* about that topic...

 

[Duncan1981]

I don't get it.

How's posting wank material a punishment?



There's several threads going on about obedience and whatnot if you actually want to *talk* about that topic...

Think you or maybe myself could be misunderstanding the idea behind it. As well as this is writen I wonder if the mistress knew it would be this good? I am hoping the student tried to please the teacher with her writing and not just making it "wank material"

 

[Lizzie_Borden]

Think you or maybe myself could be misunderstanding the idea behind it. As well as this is writen I wonder if the mistress knew it would be this good? I am hoping the student tried to please the teacher with her writing and not just making it "wank material"

Quite possibily it's been misunderstood, yes.

But then, I do also think that such things, punishments, declarations, etc should be kept private between the two (or more) people concerned, which could be clouding up my thoughts on it.

 

[Duncan1981]

Quite possibily it's been misunderstood, yes.

But then, I do also think that such things, punishments, declarations, etc should be kept private between the two (or more) people concerned, which could be clouding up my thoughts on it.[/QUOTE
-Nods-
I can understand that, but if that were the case there would be no need for this site or any like it. Not picking on your view just saying, I have seen a few people with that view and I have to wonder. Is it cause you feel shy about your sexual acts?

 

[Stephanie4play]

Maybe I can help a bit. The term punishment as used here is about the loosest use of the term that I can imagine, and I regret it's use because it appears to be diverting from the substance of the experience.

My Mistress knows that I love to write graphic erotica. if I could ask for a bit of artistic license on the use of that term maybe it would help. Literalism won't help. I wrote this the way I did as a gift to my Mistress. I wanted to demonstrate the depth of submission as I live it and feel it. We are newish to each other and this was my of communicating through my obedience.

I won't do it, but I am tempted to replace the word with something less distracting.

Fair enough?

 

[Duncan1981]

Again I very much enjoyed your writting.

 

[RJMasters]

http://www.tricountinteractive.com/images/stephaniespunishment.jpg
Stephaine, allow me to enlighten you about the finer points of punishment my dear?

When we are done you will not feel...umm how did you put it? "fulfilled rather than punished"

gigles insanely

umm yes... yes... (clears throat) Well I promise you when we are done, and IF you are still conscious, I doubt "fulfilled" would be the word you use to describe your feelings.

Look Stephaine...look into my eyes. We are going to have such fun!
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[Stephanie4play]

Again I very much enjoyed your writting.

Thank you again. I do think that some clarification was needed though, because I can understand what you guys are saying. Scrutiny in the lifestyle can be myopic and I didn't take that into account when I used such an obscure reference like brer rabbit.

I think a deeper look into the txt will yield much more provocative concepts than whether this was punishment.

There is an underlying power exchange dynamic that I think only the more discerning will interpret, but I didn't realize it when I wrote it, and it may be too personal or subtle to be perceived. I'm not sure.

 

[seela]

I can understand that, but if that were the case there would be no need for this site or any like it. Not picking on your view just saying, I have seen a few people with that view and I have to wonder. Is it cause you feel shy about your sexual acts?

I'm not Lizzie, but I'm gonna answer anyways. I'm not shy about my sexual acts, but I also don't know why anyone else should be a part of them even in a virtual form. I'm not generally interested in reading detailed stories about people's sex acts - if I want to read about them, I hop over to the story section. Much like I don't want other people to be a part of my sex life and relationship, I don't want to be a part of anyone else's by, for example, coming up with punishments for them.

I started to read and eventually joined the boards because of the discussion about bdsm related topics. It's one thing to talk about some things on a general level and another to conduct punishments or describe scenes in detail without even trying to start any discussion. Lately it seems most of the threads started here have been some sort of play.

I suppose I just like clarity. Stories under stories, discussion about BDSM related stuff on Talk and the fluffy and OT stuff on Cafe. I'm still confused as to what's the point of this thread. I admit, I didn't read the OP beyond the point when it became clear that it is a post made as a punishment, but I skimmed it and I didn't see any question or anything pointing that the OP was meant as a discussion starter.

 

[CutieMouse]

Dammit RJ I didn't even read your answer because I was so busy scrolling past the bad, evil, scary scary clown face.

To the OP- not to be nitpicky (who am I kidding?), but Lit has a publishing side, and a forum side. It's sweet that you decided to write a piece of erotica for your Mistress, but it's more of a blog/submit to the writing side if things, thing IMO.

 

[Stephanie4play]

It's really rather simple. if it's not to your taste, don't read it.

if my Mistress and I are comfortable with a public display, that's between us.

Who truly in the lifestyle hasn't had that pummeled into them? (rhetorical)

 

[KoPilot]

Yeah, this doesn't read as a discussion. It's a story.

 

[Ravenwind]

if my Mistress and I are comfortable with a public display, that's between us.

*mumbles quietly* ...and between everyone exposed to your public display...

I mean, isn't there a part of Lit where people, oh, I dunno, write and submit stories and things for people to read or listen to or otherwise indulge in?

Don't get me wrong, I *like* what you've written... but, and I don't know about anyone else here, I'm here on the forum to have discussions and chat and share opinions and stuff. If I was in the mood to read a story, I would've gone and checked out the story part of the site.

*shrugs* Maybe I'm just weird, thinking forums are meant to chat on.

 

[seela]

It's really rather simple. if it's not to your taste, don't read it.

if my Mistress and I are comfortable with a public display, that's between us.

Who truly in the lifestyle hasn't had that pummeled into them? (rhetorical)

Like I mentioned, I didn't read the OP because I've come to notice that I don't care for the posts made as a punishment and I responded to Duncan's post, because I found his question or rather the premise of it a bit weird.

And there's absolutely nothing wrong with a public display, but this is a discussion board, so I suppose I just would prefer the threads here be, you know, discussion rather than private salutes to someone's PYL/pyl with no intention of actually creating discussion.

 

[JMohegan]

The story boils down to a tale of one person humping and cuddling pillows, in a desperate attempt to forge a connection with another human being.

As such, I consider both the vocabulary used, and the forum placement, beside the point entirely. I find this tale rather hauntingly sad.

 

[00Syd]

My contribution to this thread, as concisely as I can put it:

tl;dr

 

[Stephanie4play]

Bloody amazing.

One calls it desperate, therfeore obviously can't see that it was just fun both to do and to write. Myopic false assumptions.

Another assumes it was not intended to create discussion because there was no question mark at the end.

In the end all it sparked was a shallow argument over territorial rights to a the discussion board.

The only reasonable point I see is that it might have been better placed in the Lit stories, but that was already a consideration and I am not convinced it iscout of place here.

Maybe this was a good way to introduce myself to the discussion forum. It says much to separate the wheat from the chaff.

My apologies to those legitimately offended, if there even is one. I will concede that it was naive to think it would be more well received here, as I could not have been more wrong on that point.

The impression I get is that if it can't be picked over and argued about like a gaggle of geese then it is unwelcome here.

I was naive but I am not the only party here guilty of that.

The sad part is, I'm sure there are a few here that actually do get it, but are too wise to sink into it.

Message received, loud and clear on my end.

 

[JMohegan]

I wrote this the way I did as a gift to my Mistress. I wanted to demonstrate the depth of submission as I live it and feel it.

One calls it desperate, therfeore obviously can't see that it was just fun both to do and to write.

Which is it? An expression of the depth of your submission, or just a bit of fun?

Oh. I get it now. It's both.

 

[midwestyankee]

@OP, perhaps it would help if you clarified your intent in posting your piece to the discussion board rather than to the stories side of Literotica. Either would have given the public access to your work but since you chose to post to the non-story side, it seems to be a legitimate question.

We don't always jump on new folk here but as you can see, you unwittingly (I'll give you the benefit of the doubt here) posted something quite out of the norm and then appear to have take the stance that it's somehow out of place for anyone to point that out to you.

Care to start over with something of an introduction? Is there something about your story that you would like to see discussed?

 

[wicked woman]

It's really rather simple. if it's not to your taste, don't read it.

if my Mistress and I are comfortable with a public display, that's between us.

Who truly in the lifestyle hasn't had that pummeled into them? (rhetorical)

No, it's a case of you and your Mistress making the people that frequent this forum party to your power exchange without our consent. We didn't agree to participate in your punishment. It makes no difference that it was writing erotica or getting flogged in public. You wouldn't, hopefully, go to the mall to get flogged. If it wasn't in private, you'd go to a play party where those attending had agreed to be present where such acts might occur.

I'm really getting tired of people dragging this forum into their punishments. Oh I've been bad, please tell my PYL how to punish me. Oh I've been bad, PYL says I have to post XYZ here. And surprisingly it's never done by regulars of the forum because they know its not appropriate.

Just because we're interested in BDSM doesn't mean you don't need our consent if you're bringing us into partaking of your punishment. Kindly go tell your PYL to learn proper etiquette and to learn enough about Lit to properly direct you where to post this stuff.