For some reason, I convince myself that the hardest way to do something will work out fine, and I should just go for it.
Even describing the character in 1PP without breaking the rules of the POV is herculean.
In genre if I write first person a lot of times I don't describe the character.
You sort of have to in erotica, though. A soliloquy about the size of the MCs tits is kind of immersion breaking.
Though if you are Shakespeare you can probably get away with it.
I'm not Shakespeare.
Don't get me wrong, now that I started the climb, I'm going to see it the peak. But this POV is a p.i.t.a.
And one that a lot of readers hate to begin with. So like two people will read this anyway.
And the other one will be a beta reader.
And they'll never speak to me again.
Why overambitious writer? Why?
The plot has an exhibitionism theme, sort of, involving a modeling gig. Would using photos for the gig to describe the character stand out in a bad way? Using the convenient mirror that serves no other purpose always does, but at since the photo idea serves a plot relevant purpose I think it could work if I execute properly.
The tension in the story is mostly about the MCs inner struggle with some awakening impulses. There's a reason I'm doing this horrible thing to myself. I'm just struggling to work around the inherent challenges of the perspective.
I'm mostly being tongue in cheek, but it is a p.i.t.a.
Even describing the character in 1PP without breaking the rules of the POV is herculean.
In genre if I write first person a lot of times I don't describe the character.
You sort of have to in erotica, though. A soliloquy about the size of the MCs tits is kind of immersion breaking.
Though if you are Shakespeare you can probably get away with it.
I'm not Shakespeare.
Don't get me wrong, now that I started the climb, I'm going to see it the peak. But this POV is a p.i.t.a.
And one that a lot of readers hate to begin with. So like two people will read this anyway.
And the other one will be a beta reader.
And they'll never speak to me again.
Why overambitious writer? Why?
The plot has an exhibitionism theme, sort of, involving a modeling gig. Would using photos for the gig to describe the character stand out in a bad way? Using the convenient mirror that serves no other purpose always does, but at since the photo idea serves a plot relevant purpose I think it could work if I execute properly.
The tension in the story is mostly about the MCs inner struggle with some awakening impulses. There's a reason I'm doing this horrible thing to myself. I'm just struggling to work around the inherent challenges of the perspective.
I'm mostly being tongue in cheek, but it is a p.i.t.a.