Hi all,
I'm dr_depth, the author of Witch Juice. It's a fantasy adventure about magic, witches, demons, and everything in between, all happening in the shadows of modern life.
It revolves around a witch named Lilith, who is desperate to find the descendant of an ancient, powerful wizard, thought to be the most brilliant spellcaster of his time... only to extract his semen. It's all to brew a strong potion, one potent enough to imbue her with almighty magical powers to combat the ever-looming demon threat. Join her on her sexual escapades to find her man, and kick some demon ass at the same time.
You can read the first chapter here: https://literotica.com/s/witch-juice-ch-01
And the latest update as of this forum post, Chapter 11, here: https://literotica.com/s/witch-juice-ch-11
So far, I've gotten pretty good feedback, purely in terms of ratings and favorites. However, I haven't seen a lot of comments. But from what I've seen, this is pretty typical, especially in the Sci-Fi/Fantasy section. So I've come here to see if I could get some actual feedback about the story.
I know it's weird to ask this after being 11 chapters in. I started writing the story for fun and only submitted it on a whim. When I saw that people actually liked it, I got encouraged to write more and more. So now I'm curious how my writing skills actually stack up at this point.
Thanks to all who supported my writing with ratings and feedback. It's been an absolute blast outlining, planning, and finally writing about Lilith and Emmett's bizarre adventures. I know the updates have been sparse, but I want to put a lot of time and energy into each and every one. I'll keep writing this crazy story, and I hope you all enjoy. Thanks.
I'm dr_depth, the author of Witch Juice. It's a fantasy adventure about magic, witches, demons, and everything in between, all happening in the shadows of modern life.
It revolves around a witch named Lilith, who is desperate to find the descendant of an ancient, powerful wizard, thought to be the most brilliant spellcaster of his time... only to extract his semen. It's all to brew a strong potion, one potent enough to imbue her with almighty magical powers to combat the ever-looming demon threat. Join her on her sexual escapades to find her man, and kick some demon ass at the same time.
You can read the first chapter here: https://literotica.com/s/witch-juice-ch-01
And the latest update as of this forum post, Chapter 11, here: https://literotica.com/s/witch-juice-ch-11
So far, I've gotten pretty good feedback, purely in terms of ratings and favorites. However, I haven't seen a lot of comments. But from what I've seen, this is pretty typical, especially in the Sci-Fi/Fantasy section. So I've come here to see if I could get some actual feedback about the story.
I know it's weird to ask this after being 11 chapters in. I started writing the story for fun and only submitted it on a whim. When I saw that people actually liked it, I got encouraged to write more and more. So now I'm curious how my writing skills actually stack up at this point.
Thanks to all who supported my writing with ratings and feedback. It's been an absolute blast outlining, planning, and finally writing about Lilith and Emmett's bizarre adventures. I know the updates have been sparse, but I want to put a lot of time and energy into each and every one. I'll keep writing this crazy story, and I hope you all enjoy. Thanks.
