Story editing Mom son incest romance

[sumptuouscove]

I have written a mom son romantic incest story. It's almost 4k words long. I need an editor who can edit it for me. This is my first attempt on literotica and English is not my first language. The editor can guide me if I need to put sub plot or additional dialogues etc. I'll wait eagerly for your response. Thank you.

 

[CiaoSteve]

If you are happy to paste the text into an e-mail and send it to me, I will gladly take a look. PM me and I'll give you an e-mail address to send to.

 

[CiaoSteve]

Please check your mail. I sent back a reviewed version of the story last night. BTW it was more than 9k words long which is why it took a while to review.

 

[sumptuouscove]

Thank you, I will check it

 

[sumptuouscove]

Please check your mail. I sent back a reviewed version of the story last night. BTW it was more than 9k words long which is why it took a while to review.

Please check your mail, have asked you for something more.

 

[Indianasoftball]

I have written a mom son romantic incest story. It's almost 4k words long. I need an editor who can edit it for me. This is my first attempt on literotica and English is not my first language. The editor can guide me if I need to put sub plot or additional dialogues etc. I'll wait eagerly for your response. Thank you.

Have you really done this or just written about it???

 

[sumptuouscove]

Have you really done this or just written about it???

Have completed the story. But need to add some more spice to make it interesting.

 

[pandorasbox4]

I have written a mom son romantic incest story. It's almost 4k words long. I need an editor who can edit it for me. This is my first attempt on literotica and English is not my first language. The editor can guide me if I need to put sub plot or additional dialogues etc. I'll wait eagerly for your response. Thank you.

Most exciting.. Happy to help!

 

[sumptuouscove]

I have successfully posted the story. Please do read and leave comments. It will be encouraging for me to write more
Here is the link:

https://literotica.com/s/crossing-the-forbidden-boundary