Mom son incest story

[sumptuouscove]

I finished this really long story. The story is a nearly 18,000-word narrative that explores a incest taboo theme involving a mother and her son.
I think it's error-free and well-written. But I want someone to edit it and make it flow better, be more captivating, and really fun for readers. I want it to be a thrilling roller coaster of a story. Can anyone help with the editing

Thanks

 

[Gunter99]

Hi @sumptuouscove
I'm available to edit if you are interested.
I have been on a hiatus, but coming back online to edit again.