RedFireBrand
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Steampunk Harlots (Feedback Wanted)
So I've taken a stab at writing and people seem to enjoy it. I discovered the Bulletin Board so I thought id post here.
https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=3165136&page=submissions
I'd like some feedback on my writing. Grammer, spelling, plot holes, or other mistakes are as welcome as anything else.
Hope people enjoy it. Please let me know what you think.
So I've taken a stab at writing and people seem to enjoy it. I discovered the Bulletin Board so I thought id post here.
https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=3165136&page=submissions
I'd like some feedback on my writing. Grammer, spelling, plot holes, or other mistakes are as welcome as anything else.
Hope people enjoy it. Please let me know what you think.
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