CrissySnow
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Does this sound like a good idea?
You have this average girl living back home on a dirty deserted earth. The planet has turned to shit but people still live there. She has a very distant family but she doesn't stay in touch at all. She's a street rat living in the red light district part of town with a roommate. This guy is no saint he does drugs and street deals. One night he gets his head blown off. The girl witnesses this. He knows he has a female roommate he will come back for her too since he didn't get his money. The only place to run is to another planet or galaxy. But how? She is a broke street rat living in the slums. She desperately hitch hikes a ride but it's not good from here. She hitches a ride with an escaped inmate wanted. He is the most notorious criminal in the galaxy. And from there the shit goes crazy...
It does have non consensual elements to it in the story. I started working on it today.
I don't write scifi stuff but I wanted to do this one.
I'll leave it at that let me know if it is a good start?
You have this average girl living back home on a dirty deserted earth. The planet has turned to shit but people still live there. She has a very distant family but she doesn't stay in touch at all. She's a street rat living in the red light district part of town with a roommate. This guy is no saint he does drugs and street deals. One night he gets his head blown off. The girl witnesses this. He knows he has a female roommate he will come back for her too since he didn't get his money. The only place to run is to another planet or galaxy. But how? She is a broke street rat living in the slums. She desperately hitch hikes a ride but it's not good from here. She hitches a ride with an escaped inmate wanted. He is the most notorious criminal in the galaxy. And from there the shit goes crazy...
It does have non consensual elements to it in the story. I started working on it today.
I don't write scifi stuff but I wanted to do this one.
I'll leave it at that let me know if it is a good start?
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