lovecraft68
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Just received this comment on a brother sister story which opens with the sister coming home from a party with her friends. They had a few drinks and they're passing around a bowl. Why did I write this? Two reasons, one I wanted the sister to be not quite thinking straight to add a little how can this happen for later in the story and two, this is what people at that age do(some people at any age still do) go out have fun and get a little buzz going.
This is the comment
Anonymous2 minutes ago
I liked the bro-sis story. I DID NOT like to girls IN A CAR smoking bowls of some shit after having been drinking.
That's irresponsible and dangerous to them and innocents.
Write like you care........
Alright, so most obvious thing here is Banging your brother is not an issue. Sis being stoned/buzzed is....okay then
I have had similar comments over the years, but what made this one different is the "Write like you care"
Again...It's okay to promote fictional incest, nothing wrong with that, but don't promote equally fictional partying.
These comments-or those along the same lines-show up a lot in taboo and I've seen them in NC where someone being sexually assaulted isn't an issue, but some random detail is.
I practice an honor among thieves type of mentality, if you're going to indulge in what most see as an extreme kink, then you really don't have much to say about other 'sins' within the story.
Erotica readers, who you would think would be very open and loose in things are an oddly preachy lot sometimes, even within the category they're choosing to read in. I think LW might be the biggest culprit with all the anger over make believe people cheating, but it seems like it shows up everywhere.
This is the comment
Anonymous2 minutes ago
I liked the bro-sis story. I DID NOT like to girls IN A CAR smoking bowls of some shit after having been drinking.
That's irresponsible and dangerous to them and innocents.
Write like you care........
Alright, so most obvious thing here is Banging your brother is not an issue. Sis being stoned/buzzed is....okay then
I have had similar comments over the years, but what made this one different is the "Write like you care"
Again...It's okay to promote fictional incest, nothing wrong with that, but don't promote equally fictional partying.
These comments-or those along the same lines-show up a lot in taboo and I've seen them in NC where someone being sexually assaulted isn't an issue, but some random detail is.
I practice an honor among thieves type of mentality, if you're going to indulge in what most see as an extreme kink, then you really don't have much to say about other 'sins' within the story.
Erotica readers, who you would think would be very open and loose in things are an oddly preachy lot sometimes, even within the category they're choosing to read in. I think LW might be the biggest culprit with all the anger over make believe people cheating, but it seems like it shows up everywhere.