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I find your generalizations ridiculous.The only readers who do not like bad characters in any way are stroke readers. Now I'm sure there are plenty of stroke readers out there who don't mind less than savory characters here and there, but you will be very hard pressed to find a for-plot reader who does not want to see any evil or conflict whatsoever.
Agree. I'm 30K words into an erotic romance and so far, all the conflict is internal to the MC. There are so many sources of conflict, you don't have to have an outright villain. Frankly, I find that internal conflict is more moving than external. I make my readers cry all the time, and I could probably count the 'bad characters' on one hand.I find your generalizations ridiculous.
Agree. I'm 30K words into an erotic romance and so far, all the conflict is internal to the MC. There are so many sources of conflict, you don't have to have an outright villain. Frankly, I find that internal conflict is more moving than external. I make my readers cry all the time, and I could probably count the 'bad characters' on one hand.
You want a truly evil character, though, read The Emasculation of Henry Smith. April is a piece of work. Even in this story, she's a secondary character.
Maybe their butt plug is just a little too big?Whilst I have certainly written a fair share of 'bad characters', I agree with this completely. The stories that have impressed me the most here on Literotica tends to be the ones where the conflict is internal. Maybe they're fighting a disease. Maybe they're old and want to have one last hurrah before their time runes out. Maybe they're in love with someone unobtainable. Maybe they're in love with someone that would be considered very taboo and forbidden to love. Maybe they are having a hard time coming to terms with their sexuality. These struggles can 'be the villain' just as much as a character can. It's all a story needs to be incredibly emotional.
No comment. She fidgets in her chair.Maybe their butt plug is just a little too big?
Emily
Maybe their butt plug is just a little too big?
Emily
Bad characters and even very bad characters can do good things and reveal depth. A great example of this is Tony Montana from the movie Scarface. He's a ruthless gangster and cold-blooded killer who will do anything to get ahead, build his empire and increase his wealth and power. He's an extremely bad guy. Late in the movie he accepts the job to assassinate the diplomat with a car bomb but when he witnesses two young children get into the car, he does everything that he can to abort the mission. Even this cold-blooded murderer draws the line at killing innocent children and in doing so he reveals a significant semblence of honor and suddenly becomes less bad (or at least less bad compared to the cartel thugs that he's working with who don't care about the kids) and the audience is able to actually draw at least some sympathy for this otherwise terrible and ruthless man. It's complex writing that adds depth to the character and lends very strong emotion to the plot as the audience (in that scene at least) can't help but root for Tony to save those kids.
Agree. I'm 30K words into an erotic romance and so far, all the conflict is internal to the MC. There are so many sources of conflict, you don't have to have an outright villain. Frankly, I find that internal conflict is more moving than external. I make my readers cry all the time, and I could probably count the 'bad characters' on one hand.
You want a truly evil character, though, read The Emasculation of Henry Smith. April is a piece of work. Even in this story, she's a secondary character.
Yeah, we're just going to have to agree to disagree on this. My highest rated stories are not strokers. they have hot sex but are primarily romantic dramas, and internal conflict plays a major point in all of them.Internal conflict has nothing to do with two characters having guilt free happy sex as they indulge in (insert kink), which is the template for the majority of stroke material - no tension nor conflict internal nor otherwise whatsoever - and this is the most common and popular template on lit, regardless of cateogory.
So, yes internal conflict can be very effective, but we really don't see it in these stories, so it's quite irrelevant to this particular debate.
Yeah, we're just going to have to agree to disagree on this. My highest rated stories are not strokers. they have hot sex but are primarily romantic dramas, and internal conflict plays a major point in all of them.
Or perhaps it means that even a stroker like Three Days That Changed My Life contains some inner conflict with no 'villain', and that makes it a better story, which pulls the score up. Still going to agree to disagree with your hypothesis.I just checked your submissions page and all of your stories score the same. You ave 61 submissions and all but 6 score between 4.65 and 4.9 with the vast majority between 4.7 and 4.8 so you hardly have any outliers at all - not enough to make a mathematical difference. Your highest rated stories are barely higher than your average so the difference between your best stories and any of your poorer performing 'strokers' would be so nominal that it does not support your argument.
It's a good question. There's a screenplay-writing book called "Save the Cat" that advocates for having your main character do something admirable early on, e.g., "save a cat," to endear them to the audience. It doesn't have to have anything to do with the main storyline. The book is way too formulaic to my taste, but I think this is a good point.
An important principle in erotica, IMO (not all the time but most of the time) is you have to make your readers WANT your characters to fuck. The standard arc of a romance story is that you establish early on that two characters are meant to be together, but there's something keeping them apart, and you keep your readers turning the page because they are eager to see the obstacle resolved so the romantic characters can end up together. An erotic story is basically a romance, but with fucking. I think for most of us, it's more pleasurable to read about two characters that we basically like heading toward a relationship than to read about two bad characters or one who's bad and one who's good. This makes the eventual sexual union truly satisfying on every level.
But here's the rub. You don't have to do a lot to establish a character's goodness and appeal. Do more with less. Just have them be nice to a neighbor, or say something good, or wish well toward someone, or care about the person for whom they have desire. The possibilities for establishing your character's "goodness" are almost endless.
And it's perfectly OK for them to be a mixed bag, a combination of good and bad qualities. But you're probably going to get your reader more deeply invested if there's at least something good about them.
There is definitely a balance to strike - I am a bit allergic to the type of readers who insist every character must be a cute role model they want/should emulate, "or else what will happen to my impressionable young mind?!"I don't think it's necessary for characters to be likeable. The do need to be interesting (if you chosen to write something other than simple erotica... )