Hot female doctor in extreme erotic horror story.

[21orca]

Wow! Loved all you're comments! Burning Man is my favorite to. Although he's savage in the fighting, he loves to ravage when it comes to sex. Horrible to look at, fluids seeping everywhere, and just about all that is left of his face and head is his mouth, lips, tongue. He loves to lick and kiss all over. He is the only one with the eighteen inch cock. Byproduct of the radiation. Yes, his body including the cock is hot, but as you said, like a sunburn.

I hope you see our lady doc is smart. When I say 9.5 our of ten, she is not an Erin Andrews type. I love petite women. I think they are hot. I had thought about Elizabeth Reaser, her character, Alice Alden.

Remember, not every "test subject" has animal dna. Some would be like Burning Man. Some it might have been some weird surgery.

 

[21orca]

Time to add another "test subject". This will make 11. I call him Tres. Some of you might have seen this guy on some of the 3D monster porn sites. He appears to be very large. Has no neck but appears to have about two thirds of a head attached on either side of head in the middle. Five eyes, three noses, three mouths, two ears. The center head seems to be confused or conflicted. The outer heads look mean and nasty. He's ravaging some princess in the photo.

So I'm going to expand on this guys background. This is extreme surgery gone very badly! The two side heads were grafted onto a "volunteer". The left side is pure evil, with only the thoughts of how to inflict the most pain and savageness onto an opponent. The right side is pure lust, with perverse sex always in it thoughts, even when sleeping. The two side brains, 2/3 the size of the central brain, conspire to overpower it, forcing it to do there will. The brains together, think 2/3 faster than a normal brain, giving it advantages in fighting, or sex. But this guy does not stop there. His cock has been grafted in the same way, making it VERY thick. His torso is 2/3 wider, his lungs and heart are 2/3 wider. And his hands are 2/3 wider, longer, thicker, as are his feet.

This is number 11.

 

[Sean Renaud]

I think you'd probably be just fine skipping to siamese triplets here.

 

[21orca]

He's a charming fellow LoL. I had thought also about something with tentacles, and something with insect dna.

 

[Sean Renaud]

Like I said I think you're three guy surgery works better as siamese triplets that didn't die.

For something with tentacles there are lots of routes to go there, perhaps someone with extremely long and prehensile fingers.

 

[21orca]

What about this for Tentacles; he does not have animal dna. It could be a combination of surgery, drugs, radiation, chemical, whatever. He has dozens of tentacles coming out his body. And they do a little bit of everything. Some are for fighting. One might have razor like barbs all over it, another a long machete like instrument. One might have a large hand like device. It is very strong, like the jaws of a grizzly bear, can crush a mans skull. However, other tentacles are all about sex. Penis like, some long and thin, some shorter and very thick. This is for you Etaki, some might give off fluids and or scents that act like sexual drugs, hallucinogenic in nature. Some are for women, others for men. Oh, and what if we remove his eyes, nose and ears and put them on tentacles as well, but enhanced them. He could see around corners without exposing the majority of his body. The only thing left on his face and head would be his mouth. There could be more tentacles that do other things, any ideas?

 

[cripple92996]

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One tentacle serving as an auxilery brain.
He is in love with dr, a reverse joker Harley Quinn.

 

[21orca]

I have another character to add to the list of freaks. His tongue and voice box have all been removed. In there place are glands or sacs. These secrete different fluids or mist. One is an extremely deadly poison, kills in seconds. Another might be some kind of acid. Still another might paralyze it's victim. But others release sexual stimulants. There may be several, that work different on men or women.

He would be tall and thin, not skinny, muscular in a thin way, think track runners. He would have long thin fingers. He would be very pale, almost albino. He might be referred to as Ghost, or something similar, given his appearance. Any thoughts?

This should be about 12-14 guys. I'd like to adds some more human/ hybrids that have had animal dna injected into them. Again, any more suggestion?

 

[Sean Renaud]

I'd probably skip the acid and poison at least unless you plan on writing up profiles or something for each of the characters and on Lit I have NO idea where you would place such a thing. I like the idea don't get me wrong but I would stick to things that are relevant to the story.

Remember in 13 ghosts all the characters did have a back story but if you didn't own the DVD and watch the special features they were generally just described by their code name and maybe the smallest bit of info. You kinda gathered all you need to from Hammer and moved on.

I think we probably need one more female and then a condensed list so we can all look over it real quick. Good job guiding the conversation and keeping it moving by the way. It's rare to see someone take charge like that around here. Usually people dump an idea here and ignore it or come back butthurt that nobody else took the ball and ran with it.

I'm gonna see if I can get a first couple of pages started over the next week or so. I'm still swamped (and hopefully I won't be the only person working on this) but I really like the work that's been done so far.

 

[21orca]

Thanks for the complement. I admit, I enjoy the process as much or more than the outcome. Don't get me wrong, I want to see this story come to life. But in some ways it already has.

Yeah, the character development is probably a little overdone, but that's for us hear, on the forum, to say, "oh yeah, I know who he is".

I can't remember, may have been in a private mess., I have went back and forth about another female character. To be another of the patience/inmates, or how about an assistant to the old man doctor. Someone who when he left the eastern hospital, she went with him. I pictured, a woman in her late fifties, hard and cold, distant. Knows full well what the old man doc is doing, and thinks it's fine. A story line, she's a lesbian who develops a lust for our lady doctor, to have sex with her, or watch her having sex with some of the freaks.

One refinement to our young, hot lady doc. Etaski and I want her to be a little more geeky, brainy. Still very hot and sexy. But someone who uses sex as a weapon to survive. What about modeling her after Danica McKellar? Not using her real name of course, but she becomes the model. A play off her name for our lady doc, what about Danielle McAdams? Hot, sexy petite, brunette? And her friends call her "Dani".

As for as a name for the old man doctor, something regal and commanding, Charles Xavier Sherrod? I just made that one up.

I've got one other setup piece, when Danielle McAdams and Charles Xavier Sherrod actually meet. Unless that's stepping on your writers privilege. If so I'll step back.

 

[Etaski]

I like the idea don't get me wrong but I would stick to things that are relevant to the story.

That's pretty much where I'm sitting. I'll be filtering through the barrage of details to lift the ones that are usable and enhance the story without overwhelming it. The framework would be there, though.

I'm gonna see if I can get a first couple of pages started over the next week or so. I'm still swamped (and hopefully I won't be the only person working on this) but I really like the work that's been done so far.

Also where I'm sitting. I have another story that has priority and I have the day-job as well but...I want to work on this where I'm able. The brainstorming feels complete for what I want to include.

My version, though, will only have the one female doctor, no other women because if I write this at all, it has to be focused and relatively short (compared to what it could be if someone wanted to make it a full-blown series and give each freak his own chapter). Although "short" for me on a "Beauty and the Beast/Chase and Capture" idea like this is still 30K-40K words easily.

I also commend your broad contributions and enthusiasm, 21orca, you gave us a lot to work with, were very flexible and kept the conversation going. I'll add an update here if it looks like things will pan out; once I get started I'll know more.

 

[21orca]

I do think there is one more set of characters we have not covered, the guards. There would have to be some type of guards here, but they would be in my opinion, background, even cannon fodder to some degree, with one exception. A henchman. In Island of Dr Moreau, there was a henchman, just about all other stories like this a henchman. Someone who does the dirty work. A man, grizzled, rough by nature, always dirty looking. He has a sidearm, large machete, and a whip. He leers at our lady doc, Danielle, and she knows it(a story there?). The guards are always getting in fights with the man/ things. And mostly losing. They get tore up, loose an arm, a leg. Maybe this is where Danielle gets suspicious because she has to try and patch some of them up?

 

[Sean Renaud]

I'll admit that a lot of what I'm using for frame work here comes from Batman's Arkham. I think with the guards you really have two routes. The first is the obvious one that the majority of them are basically background people but you have to be a pretty bad motherfucker to survive this place. I mean it was "bad" enough when you had these guys limited to sexual powers but a lot of these guys really qualify as full on legit do not fuck with super villains. Your guards are gonna be some of the baddest sonbitches ever to walk the earth because that's the only reason their heads are still connected with their torsos.

I'm not a huge fan of Igor though and that's all I can really see with the grizzled guard. I'm thinking for the special guard (especially in this story) you need the guy who's actually "good" and can put the other prisoners in their place. He's the reason she survives. Perhaps he's the Doctor's Son and he's the one successful experiment but the process has never been replicated (read up on Marvel and the number of times they tried to recreate Captain America, Spiderman, the Hulk or Wolverine. Apparently in fiction shit that only works right once is quite common)

I've already kinda settled on how I plan on doing the lady doctor but I'll take the changes under advice if I can clear enough room on my schedule. Like I said I will try.

 

[21orca]

I'm open to however you want to handle the guards. The other route I had in mind is our good Doctor Sherrod and his henchman is having trouble finding and keeping guards because these are the baddest motherfuckers around. That they're having to take anyone they can find. You can imagine our henchman going through every seedy bar in the worst locations in Central and South American cities trying to convince even homeless and drug addicts to take the job. The only thing he would have going for him is LOTS of money he can throw around. Longevity on the job would not be a positive here!!

And maybe that's the match thrown into the fire. The guards slowly, not all at once, begins to loose control because they are not worth a shit. A riot breaks out, and each time it's harder to get them under control. And each time the beautiful Danielle keeps getting caught in the middle. And each time the sex gets more perverse and extreme? Just a thought.

 

[21orca]

Just a thought on that last thread, it would be kind or boring and get old if the only way our beautiful lady doc Danielle was having sex with the monsters was because of riots and always getting caught in the wrong place at the wrong time. The first couple of times might be that way, but some would need to be of her own free will.

 

[21orca]

I must be getting dumber as I get older. Scratch Charles Xavier Sherrod. What was I thinking?? Might use Charles Sherrod only.

 

[Sean Renaud]

Oh I was gonna say something about how you can't have PRofessor X as the doctor at a compound full of mutant freaks sooner or later. I'm told that I'm too harsh around these parts and you were doing such a good job that I figured I'd hold off on that since it was something I could easily change without even mentioning it.

 

[cripple92996]

yes

It seems that the intake process is also important. Our brave scientist will underg a transformative moment from curiosity to desire.

 

[21orca]

There is one more setup piece I'd like to present, and anyone can pull out of it anything they want to, little or a lot.

It's the beginning of the relationship between our beautiful Dr Danielle(Dani) McAdams and Dr Charles Sherrod. Dani, having lost her job, is almost "lost". Always working, or going to school, now she finds herself alone, and for the first time, no purpose to her life. Then out of the blue, Dr Charles Sherrod contacts her. He is intrigued by her interpretation of his work. The thing that will define his legacy. Either a great scientist, or Dr Frankenstein. So he invites Dani to come to his island, and work fir him. Danielle is almost beside herself, someone she admires, thinks is misunderstood, has ask her to work for him. Almost a dream come true. She can learn so much from him, she thinks. So jumps at the chance to go.

Now, she has finally arrived. The old fishing boat captain who ferries her overthere( the one who warned her not to go in an earlier thread), ask her again not to stay. She says she will be OK. But he insist she take the radio frequency to his boats radio, just in case she changes her mind( an escape route in the future for Dani??) Finally to meet Dr Sherrod. She is almost giddy!

An truck picks her up at the boat dock, with a guard that makes Dani a little nervous. He leers at her, almost undresses her with his eyes. After driving several miles on dirt roads, they arrive at the research hospital. It is not what Dani expected. It is a very large, old rundown, almost scary looking place. Guards and fences everywhere. The guards all look unkept, but mean. Then she goes inside, and suddenly, it looks more familiar, typical looking hospital, but seemingly very little staff. She is taken to an area which resembles more lavish looking living quarters. Here, finally Dani and Dr Sherrod meet. She is just a little overwhelmed. But Dr Sherrod is taken by her, petite, brunette, very pretty in a geek sort of way. A beautiful body in a petite way, dressed in a silk blouse and short skirt. Dr Sherrod has seen almost no females except prostitutes brought over to the island for several years. Suddenly here is a beautiful, brainy young woman, that may not be his long leggy blonde type, but wild forbidden thoughts enter his mind about Dani, he would love to have sex with her! Dani looks at him as almost a mentor, someone she could look up to. In time all that will change for her.

The rest of this setup goes something like this. She takes the job. Dr Sherrod doubles the salary she was making, even gives her up front money to pay off some debts. Her quarters are lavish. But they are entirely bugged, sound cameras everything. Dr Sherrod tells her she can walk freely around the hospital compound, shows her the labs. But also shows her an elevator. He tells her it is off limits to her. He makes up a bullshit story that it houses dangerous equipment and for her to stay away. Of course we know what is down there. And soon Dani will find out the hard way.

Her research starts out normally. Test subjects are brought to her lab. These are the legit patience, but are still grotesque in appearance. That does begin to change, slowly. Some of the man/things start to show up. And well... We know what happens after.

An idea cripple92996 gave me, what if her research was some type of Clockwork Orange thing, to try and remove violence, by drug therapy, or whatever, but it goes terribly wrong and only makes the freaks worse. And at this point Dr Sherrod, who views her as his last hope, loses and just begins to think about Dani and what he can do to her. He envisions her having sex with all the monsters.

One more thing, the first encounter Dani has with the freaks is at a "fight club" type event. I hope Lit. will let some of this be told. Dani sneaks down into the hellhole, and witnesses the savage fighting, but no sex. After this event, the fighting can be kept to a minimum, just implied it's going on. She sneaks back again, and, well...this is where maybe she gets caught? With Dr Sherrod watching everything and becoming very aroused.

OK, that's it. Probably waaaaay to much. But it was fun setting it up.

 

[21orca]

If you wanted another female, it could be a one shot freak monster, and I'll let you guys come up with the background, if you want one.

One more thought, and this is pretty gross, even for this thread, an old professor I once had said the ultimate survivor in any war, and that included a nuclear one, would be a roach. Not because they are great fighters, but because they are more or less born to breed. They win by numbers. The dna of a roach imbedded into a human?? Just a stray thought. Good night everyone.

 

[21orca]

You ask for a list to get my man/monsters in some order. This is probably enough, but you can add or subtract off ten list.

Hammer and Juggernaut, or something similiar from 13 Ghosts.
Burning Man
Cannibal(piranha dna)
Tetacles(no animal dna)
Hyena/tranny(animal dna)
Savage(canine dna)
Ox(bovine dna)
Hog(porcine dna)
Serpent(dna from snake)
Trip and Leer, Etaski's two guys

There are backgrounds for all back in the threads.

A few other thoughts, maybe something with insect dna( what was the name of that movie back in the eighties where the female crew member of a spaceship gets raped by a giant centipede?), and the name "Maneater" keeps going through my brain, no chacacter, just fill in the blanks. There was also another movie( can't remember it's name either! They say the memory is the first thing to go!) back in the nineties where some guy had multiple heads that would come out of his body during times of stress. There are probably "other" test subjects "failures" held underground as well, but they don't have to be seen, just implied. And there are probably other real patients in the hospital floors above ground, with severe problems, but again, just background, just implied.

 

[21orca]

I'd almost forgot another place from where we could pick up another man/monster. Resident Evil. The story line as to there creation would be different. And they could be "toned down" a little.

Most of you have probably never seen the old 60's tv show, The Outer Limits. Google it and take a look. Some of the greatest sci fi stories you will ever see. One story line in particular had to do with the US govt "creating" it's own monster. The actor Robert Culp played the monster. He had many surgeries to "transform" him into a creature. I forget the reason, create a weapon or something like that. But he was turned into something totally unhuman, almost alien. So how about turning a man into a resident evil monster, only slightly less monster, but more of a sexual appetite?

 

[Sean Renaud]

First depending on what you wanted I would argue that there are plenty of Resident Evil Monsters that don't really need modifying to be sexual.

I don't think I need to be creative to figure out a way to make a slightly larger than human quadraped with a tongue that's at least two feet long based on comparing to the rest of the body (in that shot, I think their tongues are several times longer than their bodies in actual cannon) turns out to be sexual.

Resident Evil 5 features the Ouroburos which are essentially classic tentacle monsters. Those pretty much explain themselves. Tyrants can and often do have tentacles as well.

That's just off the top of my head of course. Really the Viruses in RE pretty much do whatever the fuck they please because they want to.

 

[21orca]

So, what would be you're top three or four resident evil monsters?

Also, could this play into a storyline, the non animal dna man/monsters vs the animal dna man/monsters in a "fight club" type setting? The old doc, Dr Sherrod allowing it to go on, with our young doc, Danielle getting caught up in the lurid, sexual part of it?

 

[Sean Renaud]

Top three Re monsters?

I'd have to go with the Licker pictured above.

Ms. Harper

And I'm calling and audible to bring in Eve from Parasite Eve

Take this however you want because it is both a compliment and a complaint at the same time. This is starting to get REALLY complicated and the thing that's a bit of a challenge writing wise is that there are so many fucking moving parts to this thing. It's beautiful if you can ever get someone or a group of someones to write it but that doesn't change the fact that you've got a lot going on here. My advice now would be to clean it up see if you can get a single post that covers all the important bits ina clear and concise way and then see where things go from there.