I have several chapters of a "The Muse is a Goddess" up. The story has a couple young beautiful girls, orgasm denial, chastity, bondage, a girl having lots of orgasms and a little humor.
My thought is reading a story even about sex can get dry so a little humor makes things a bit lighter and puts a little more personality in the situation that is hopefully turning you on. I have followed a theme on each chapter so there is a little connection to each one liner as the story moves on.
But I have gotten a few feedbacks suggesting the humor is not helping. So I am looking to get a little more feedback justifying me continuing the humor. So if you could spare a moment, please read a little and tell me what you think.
I would also like to say that to me a girl keeping a guy horny with orgasm denial does not need to always be a Dom but could also be a girl that likes to get devious when teasing a guy and take advantage of him and be greedy about having the horny guy please her. If you are that girl or a Dom I would love to hear your thoughts on the stories activities and how they are presented.
And little observation about my hidden online life. I was at a party the other day and I said my alter ego writes fantasy sex stories. I got a big laugh as my normal life would never seem that could happen.
For those that take some time to read and comment, I offer a really big thank you!
My thought is reading a story even about sex can get dry so a little humor makes things a bit lighter and puts a little more personality in the situation that is hopefully turning you on. I have followed a theme on each chapter so there is a little connection to each one liner as the story moves on.
But I have gotten a few feedbacks suggesting the humor is not helping. So I am looking to get a little more feedback justifying me continuing the humor. So if you could spare a moment, please read a little and tell me what you think.
I would also like to say that to me a girl keeping a guy horny with orgasm denial does not need to always be a Dom but could also be a girl that likes to get devious when teasing a guy and take advantage of him and be greedy about having the horny guy please her. If you are that girl or a Dom I would love to hear your thoughts on the stories activities and how they are presented.
And little observation about my hidden online life. I was at a party the other day and I said my alter ego writes fantasy sex stories. I got a big laugh as my normal life would never seem that could happen.
For those that take some time to read and comment, I offer a really big thank you!