ChimilDetin
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Hi all — noob here.
I have an idea for a story that's poured out of me to the tune of nearly 100 pages (!) over the past week, with probably at least another 50-100 to go.
I started to think about partial publication of the story, then took a look at the guidelines and got a little scared to continue at all.
I'm just wondering if the concept is valid for the site or not.
Here's a synopsis:
Right now, in my mental outline of the story, it has nine sex scenes. One I'm worried about is one where Taylor gets "surprised" by a less than savory customer who is rough with her doing anal. I'm workshopping it in my head to figure out how to making it a less-than-positive experience without ranging into non-con. I want it to set up a triumphant final scene where Taylor overcomes the previous bad experience to willingly include anal in a final dalliance with a different customer.
Of these scenes, six — all the non-lesbian ones — would include fictional prostitution in a fictional Detroit strip club. However, the club would be based quite a bit on real Detroit clubs, and, frankly, stuff that been reported to have gone on in Detroit strip clubs. The Penthouse Club in Detroit was shut down for such activities.
The "club manager" character would also run a "dancer recruitment service." While both the manager character and service would be fictional, they would be largely based on real life. Google HBO's Topless Prophet to understand.
There would also be a mild implication the club is linked to organized crime, but it only be to explain how they get away with what happens, not a central plot point.
Anyhow, I'm just wondering if it's even worth me continuing with the story or if I'm just wasting my time such that this story will never fit the site's guidelines. Thanks in advance.
I have an idea for a story that's poured out of me to the tune of nearly 100 pages (!) over the past week, with probably at least another 50-100 to go.
I started to think about partial publication of the story, then took a look at the guidelines and got a little scared to continue at all.
I'm just wondering if the concept is valid for the site or not.
Here's a synopsis:
In a world where things went a little differently, the Detroit Lions beat the San Francisco 49ers in the NFC Championship to go to the Super Bowl and face the Chiefs.
Before the big game, a flamboyant Detroit strip club manager gets publicity for offering a playful bet to Taylor Swift: If Swift's boyfriend, Travis Kelce, can lead his Chiefs over the Lions, Swift gets $1 million for herself or charity. If the Lions win, though, Swift must come "dance" at his best club for five days.
The bet goes mildly viral, then talk of it largely disappears — because Taylor secretly took it to both silence the discussion and show confidence in her man. When the Lions win, in part because Kelce suffers a serious injury, Taylor eventually must "pay up."
With Kelce unable to fulfill a promise to be Taylor's club white knight, she heads to Detroit weeks later during a gap in touring to complete her end of the bargain as quietly as possible.
She soon finds out Detroit strip clubs aren't what she expected: They're truly more like brothels. She also has to deal with a fellow dancer who turns on her, some overconfidence leading her to a too-rough customer, and the looming threat of being found out and having her image as America's sweetheart shattered.
However, even after discovering the true nature of Detroit's clubs and dealing with the above and more, Taylor goes through with it, seeing it as a journey of self and sexual discovery.
She's helped by a mentor stripper, the high-earning "Jessica," who is skilled with both men and women and goes from disliking Taylor's sweetheart image to cheering her on in her journey of sexual discovery. We also find out Jessica has a young daughter who may have a connection to Taylor & Travis.
In the end, Taylor walks away from the experience transformed, happier with her sexuality and feeling like she understands people's wants and needs better. Jessica also transforms, as she becomes more at peace with her role in people's lives as a dancer.
Right now, in my mental outline of the story, it has nine sex scenes. One I'm worried about is one where Taylor gets "surprised" by a less than savory customer who is rough with her doing anal. I'm workshopping it in my head to figure out how to making it a less-than-positive experience without ranging into non-con. I want it to set up a triumphant final scene where Taylor overcomes the previous bad experience to willingly include anal in a final dalliance with a different customer.
Of these scenes, six — all the non-lesbian ones — would include fictional prostitution in a fictional Detroit strip club. However, the club would be based quite a bit on real Detroit clubs, and, frankly, stuff that been reported to have gone on in Detroit strip clubs. The Penthouse Club in Detroit was shut down for such activities.
The "club manager" character would also run a "dancer recruitment service." While both the manager character and service would be fictional, they would be largely based on real life. Google HBO's Topless Prophet to understand.
There would also be a mild implication the club is linked to organized crime, but it only be to explain how they get away with what happens, not a central plot point.
Anyhow, I'm just wondering if it's even worth me continuing with the story or if I'm just wasting my time such that this story will never fit the site's guidelines. Thanks in advance.
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