I read the story. It was told from the point of view of a group of boys being voyeurs watching others. No conflict, no resolution, not much of a plot. It was all over the map. It was fun to read and that is what got you the 3 rating.
You know what really sucks about this is that I bet if you made it clear that the marriage vows in a particular relationship in an LW story were different according to that couple's unique desires and needs, the story would still get flamed. For example, in a consensual cuckoldry relationship, both partners agree that one party can "cheat." When she does it, it's not actually violating anything. Who cares about a violated vow if nobody recognizes that vow to hold any water going in? So, it simply cannot be that alone which draws their ire. This is why I don't think that it's a completely unfounded claim to say that the BTB or monogamy fetish brigade are misogynistic.
Yeah, some men might enjoy that. If they are into it, fine. If they want to switch partners, also fine. But don't expect a story like that to do well in LW. Put it in erotic couplings etc. Even fetish or bdsm if you push that part of it. You can't force a square peg into a round hole without expecting splinters.
Mine was going to be married lesbians with one getting inseminated and catching feelings for the guy and going back more than strictly necessary. I was going to have the other one get mad but then perhaps get even by sleeping with the same guy. Perhaps they end up getting two kids out of it. I may get to it someday.
The category is for whatever we authors decide it's for. The readers get whatever we decide to give them.
The problem here is that your quote-unquote "round hole" is labeled as square-shaped, if we were to run with this metaphor.
That is where many of the LW readers think it (the story) should shift over to fetish. I have a read a few stories that hit that balance to get by. The writing is the key. That is the hard part.
And who decides who are the trolls? I get flamed for all my stories by some. I did not do this hard enough, or I missed that. Yet my stories have done well overall in that genre.
Yeah, let the overall category description tell you your story should be accepted and praised. I got low ratings in BDSM for a story that I thought hit every point. Oh well....
First, they weren't "boys", they were 30-year-olds, because the one had been divorced for ten years and had thinning hair.
Now THAT is a plot. You will want some angst, some kind of conflict. Revenge or retribution is a side issue. It is a justifiable resolution to the conflict that is key. Damn! I'd hate to steal your idea. I won't....but.......I'd love to.
They were 'boys' despite their ages. Mom called down to one. So what if one talked about going full time with the fire department. They were adolescent in their mentality.
Have you seen a doctor about that allergy? LOL.
Basement dwelling, incel trolls, still living at home in their parents' basement, when in their 30's.
Which would make your input into such a story even better. How would a lesbian have a kid (without adoption) but not want a random sperm donor. If she/they opted to be cheap and not go with artificial insemination how might they work it? Interesting concept.
There's plenty of room on lit for two lesbian insemination double cheating stories, I'm sure!
Oh, I understood. What you call incels and compare with the regular readers in LW are what many would call boys despite their age. Might be the reason you do not understand the readers in LW.
I think the people that consistently defend them or try to pretend they are something other than hate speech are showing their personal biases.
I have that same problem. Also dust-mites. I've learned to live with it, by only having sex with people with pussies, and vacuuming the house regularly.
