Hello everyone,
Just wanted to throw out my story and see if I could get some feedback on my new story. This is my first time writing on literotica and I enjoyed writing, but would see if my "writing" itself lends itself well to an audience and worth writing more.
Would love to hear anything! Please positive vibes, helpful criticism and construction is welcomed, just no "it sucks" completely negative comments. It would be appreciated.
Search "Oh, Julie!" or here's the link https://www.literotica.com/s/oh-julie
Just wanted to throw out my story and see if I could get some feedback on my new story. This is my first time writing on literotica and I enjoyed writing, but would see if my "writing" itself lends itself well to an audience and worth writing more.
Would love to hear anything! Please positive vibes, helpful criticism and construction is welcomed, just no "it sucks" completely negative comments. It would be appreciated.
Search "Oh, Julie!" or here's the link https://www.literotica.com/s/oh-julie