Looking for feedback on my first story

[Gunt6000]

Hi i'm new to writing in this site and I'm kinda insecure about it. I would really appreciate any feedback to improve. The topic of the story is gay incest so if that's disgusting to you that's okay just ignore this but if you don't mind then I would like to know your opinion.

Link: https://literotica.com/s/bonding-with-my-father

Thanks.

 

[annabellebrito]

Hi i'm new to writing in this site and I'm kinda insecure about it. I would really appreciate any feedback to improve. The topic of the story is gay incest so if that's disgusting to you that's okay just ignore this but if you don't mind then I would like to know your opinion.

Link: https://literotica.com/s/bonding-with-my-father

Thanks.

I'll give it a read. If it's straight to bi, then I'll definitely will

 

[annabellebrito]

Left you feedback to your email and page

 

[Gunt6000]

I'll give it a read. If it's straight to bi, then I'll definitely will

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