I'd like someone to read a bit of something.

Trinique_Fire · Feb 1, 2012

I'd love for someone to read something I have going. Not to edit, but to see what emotions the story evokes, what you're picturing, what there needs to be more of, less of, what it reminds you of, etc, etc.

Volunteers? I promise you won't be disappointed.

_Lynn_ · Feb 1, 2012

I have time, if you still need someone.

Trinique_Fire · Feb 1, 2012

MistressLynn said:
I have time, if you still need someone.

I do. I'll PM it along. :heart:

Tio_Narratore · Feb 1, 2012

If you need a second, send a copy my way.

Trinique_Fire · Feb 1, 2012

Tio_Narratore said:
If you need a second, send a copy my way.

Sent!

I'm very interested to see what reactions I get. I suppose it's a bit like a focus group for my work in progress.

Tio_Narratore · Feb 1, 2012

Trinique_Fire said:
Sent!

I'm very interested to see what reactions I get. I suppose it's a bit like a focus group for my work in progress.

A focus group in the AH? Haven't you been following the threads here?

Trinique_Fire · Feb 1, 2012

Tio_Narratore said:
A focus group in the AH? Haven't you been following the threads here?

You're right. What was I thinking?

A scattered brain group. That's what I meant.

TheOlderGuy · Feb 1, 2012

Count me in--I love to get mail.

JackLuis · Feb 1, 2012

Send me one too. I like reading experimental stuff.

Trinique_Fire · Feb 1, 2012

Sent, and sent.

I want to say thank you to everyone who has read/is reading right now. I've gotten great feedback and some good suggestions to think about. :rose:

mynameisben · Feb 1, 2012

May I join the Readers Club, please?

Fish_Tales · Feb 1, 2012

I'd be happy to read it as well and comment if you have not been too deluged!!

Trinique_Fire · Feb 1, 2012

Sent, and sent. :rose:

Stella_Omega · Feb 1, 2012

Trinique_Fire said:
You're right. What was I thinking?

A scattered brain group. That's what I meant.

take advantage of mine too, then, if you still need scattered brains.

Trinique_Fire · Feb 15, 2012

Focus groupies, I still owe some of you PM's. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and respond with your thoughts. I haven't made all my editing changes yet (since I'd like to get through the first draft and actually FINISH it), but I am keeping notes and have saved all PM's to AbiWord.

You're all wonderful. :heart:

Handley_Page · Feb 15, 2012

Trinique_Fire said:
I'd love for someone to read something I have going. Not to edit, but to see what emotions the story evokes, what you're picturing, what there needs to be more of, less of, what it reminds you of, etc, etc.

Volunteers? I promise you won't be disappointed.

I'm here, if I can help.

Handley_Page · Feb 15, 2012

Stella_Omega said:
take advantage of mine too, then, if you still need scattered brains.

Stella, one thing I have learned you ain't is scatterbrained.

Trinique_Fire · Feb 16, 2012

Stella definitely isn't scatter brained. She knows exactly what she's doing with her brain. And my gods is it ever erotic.

Trinique_Fire · Feb 16, 2012

Darling HP, I've sent you the latest copy. :rose:

Thank you.

mathuranjali1983 · Feb 16, 2012

I'm happy to help as well

XXplorher · Feb 18, 2012

Trinique_Fire said:
I'd love for someone to read something I have going. Not to edit, but to see what emotions the story evokes, what you're picturing, what there needs to be more of, less of, what it reminds you of, etc, etc.

Volunteers? I promise you won't be disappointed.

Spectacularly well asked.

You've already got your volunteers. And if you're any good? You're on your way. If you're not 'immediately' good? that's not a good reason to stop.

Sorry I'm late. You're already ahead.

Trinique_Fire · Feb 19, 2012

XXplorher said:
Spectacularly well asked.

You've already got your volunteers. And if you're any good? You're on your way. If you're not 'immediately' good? that's not a good reason to stop.

Sorry I'm late. You're already ahead.

Thank you

I've been writing for a while, and I like to think I have some talent. It's what I love to do. In the past, the case has been that I reach a certain point, doubt myself, and stop, but I'm not letting that happen this time. This is something I want to finish and publish, and so it is...I keep soldiering on.

robertreams · Mar 19, 2014

I'll take a look

Bramblethorn · Mar 19, 2014

robertreams said:
I'll take a look

This thread is two years old.

Handley_Page · Mar 19, 2014

mynameisben said:
May I join the Readers Club, please?

Me too please

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