max_veridius
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- Sep 20, 2012
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I've penned the first part of a longer story. The plot tells of the erotic journey of King Phillip of ancient Greece.
As a first time author, I'm looking for sound editorial advice, including some feedback on the story itself.
Truthful, but gentle with words, if you please
Any volunteers?
Max
As a first time author, I'm looking for sound editorial advice, including some feedback on the story itself.
Truthful, but gentle with words, if you please
Any volunteers?
Max