RachelPost
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- Feb 26, 2022
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Could I please get someone to edit my newest story? It is the second chapter of my story "A Very Personal Assistant." That story was about how a CEO and her personal assistant became lovers. The CEO helps expand the naive assistant's experiences with lesbian sex. The new chapter expands upon it. It has an ending that calls out for a chapter three, which is already being fleshed out.
I have spell-checked it, grammar-checked it, and combed through it carefully. I need someone to find all the basic errors I missed (there are always things that get missed). I also would like it checked for consistency and flow of the story. I need someone who isn't afraid to express constructive criticism. How else do we learn from our mistakes?
The story is right around 5800 words, which is about the same length as part one, and also my other stories. Also. I know people have other stories as well as real lives. So I am not in a rush, but am excited about getting this story published.
Rachel
I have spell-checked it, grammar-checked it, and combed through it carefully. I need someone to find all the basic errors I missed (there are always things that get missed). I also would like it checked for consistency and flow of the story. I need someone who isn't afraid to express constructive criticism. How else do we learn from our mistakes?
The story is right around 5800 words, which is about the same length as part one, and also my other stories. Also. I know people have other stories as well as real lives. So I am not in a rush, but am excited about getting this story published.
Rachel