NotWise
Desert Rat
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My "best critique" example actually came in the feedback forum, rather than from AH, but from an author who posts here. I asked in that forum about what was wrong with my story and I got a wealth of thoughtful one or two paragraph summary replies that I had a hard time factoring back into "what do I do next?" That included comments from my volunteer beta reader.
The "Your story sux..." reply was followed by a few paragraphs that described the train of thought in my story. The insult (and the following explanation) let me integrate some of the other comments that I did not really understand into what I hope was a more cohesive picture of the problem.
The "Your story sux..." reply was followed by a few paragraphs that described the train of thought in my story. The insult (and the following explanation) let me integrate some of the other comments that I did not really understand into what I hope was a more cohesive picture of the problem.