Anyone willing to give feedback? (Looking for female input)

[filthytrancendence]

Gemini is not a caring and understanding lover. It's very much a 30-seconder at best.

I'm not going to sit here and listen to you talk about Jim and I that way.

 

[Kelliezgirl]

I’ll consider reading at least some of it. But I would like to know:

1. How long is it - I don’t have time to read a novella?
2. What category - there are some I won’t read (including I/T, NC/R, IR, MC, LW)?
3. Is it just feedback on the FMC’s POV you want, or anything broader?

I’m not offering editing services. I’m not offering writing coaching services. I’m not offering proofreading services. I reserve the right to stop reading if I’m struggling with it (I’ll tell you why - most likely content, or it being poorly written, or I got bored). If you think I’m not selling the idea, I have no intent of doing so.

Much as I’m worried about them from a privacy point of view, a Google Document would be the path of least resistance.

Bear in mind I’m just a random author, who has only been doing this for a few years, not some paragon, or guru. It will only be my opinion you get.

Finally, further to what @NotWise said above, I’m not interested in sexy chats, or in telling you how physically excited your words made me. Understood?

If that’s all OK, then PM me. Or not…

Mind if I save this for later?
I may have need for it.

 

[FrancesScott]

Mind if I save this for later?
I may have need for it.

Sure

 

[Trionyx]

I'm not going to sit here and listen to you talk about Jim and I that way.

You might want to check out the thread ‘Grammar help, please.’