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It all started with my English teacher, but that story is strictly ASSTR.orgAh yes, the surprisingly common fetish known as litdom.
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It all started with my English teacher, but that story is strictly ASSTR.orgAh yes, the surprisingly common fetish known as litdom.
Yeah, OP, I'm sorry it took 17 comments for someone to make this point. Maybe you're a bad writer and maybe you're not, and if you're bad maybe it's OK and maybe it isn't (you have to put food on the table somehow!), but asking an AI this is one of the worst uses of AI I can think of.Fuck Deepseek. I've seen your improvement and I think it's awesome.
The only quality metric that matters is your own.
Sure, keep at it.I haven't posted anything in several months, but I've been slowly working on a couple stories.
I've known since I started that I'm not a good writer, but I liked what I was posting up. I don't really have the drive to be the best writer ever, but I was hoping that there would be some improvement.
Today I put a draft of a story in DeepSeek and told it to give me a harsh critique. It said it was bad and that I should delete the draft and start over (among other things).
Fine, I told it to be harsh and it was, but it also told me things that I know about my writing.
I don't know what I'm looking for, but is it okay to suck at writing and know you suck, if you like what you write?
Yeah, OP, I'm sorry it took 17 comments for someone to make this point. Maybe you're a bad writer and maybe you're not, and if you're bad maybe it's OK and maybe it isn't (you have to put food on the table somehow!), but asking an AI this is one of the worst uses of AI I can think of.
I love youEverybody started out as a bad writer. You get better by writing, and writing what you enjoy is the best thing you can do.
I don't know what I'm looking for, but is it okay to suck at writing and know you suck, if you like what you write?
Just about anything worth doing is worth doing half-assed. It's great if you can put a full ass into a project (and then publish it in Anal), but unless there are lives on the line, I think it's fine to devote just one buttock to a hobby.
@alohadaveI haven't posted anything in several months, but I've been slowly working on a couple stories.
I've known since I started that I'm not a good writer, but I liked what I was posting up. I don't really have the drive to be the best writer ever, but I was hoping that there would be some improvement.
Today I put a draft of a story in DeepSeek and told it to give me a harsh critique. It said it was bad and that I should delete the draft and start over (among other things).
Fine, I told it to be harsh and it was, but it also told me things that I know about my writing.
I don't know what I'm looking for, but is it okay to suck at writing and know you suck, if you like what you write?
but is it okay to suck at writing and know you suck, if you like what you write?
'don't get it written right, just get it written'
I agree with the other comments in this thread but I wanted to say a few things. First, I don’t know what DeepSeek is and I don’t care. The only legitimate source of feedback is other readers (including yourself). Second, if you enjoy writing, or if you are driven to write, keep writing. Third — the only thing that would be bad is if you don’t work on your craft. If there are things that you think you can improve on, do so. But of course the only way to do that is to keep writing.I haven't posted anything in several months, but I've been slowly working on a couple stories.
I've known since I started that I'm not a good writer, but I liked what I was posting up. I don't really have the drive to be the best writer ever, but I was hoping that there would be some improvement.
Today I put a draft of a story in DeepSeek and told it to give me a harsh critique. It said it was bad and that I should delete the draft and start over (among other things).
Fine, I told it to be harsh and it was, but it also told me things that I know about my writing.
I don't know what I'm looking for, but is it okay to suck at writing and know you suck, if you like what you write?
But here's the thing: at least those writers have written a story, they've published it, they've presented it for the world to read.There’s a basic misconception when people talk about bad writing on free platforms: there’s rarely anything truly good.
To be fair, the great Tilan did have some content here until he removed it, an alt or two ago. Essentially channeling Proust, with the same excess of nineteenth century verbosity. But now, it's pontification central without the balls to be measured like the rest of us.But here's the thing: at least those writers have written a story, they've published it, they've presented it for the world to read.
And that makes them better writers than all those supposed authors who never complete or publish anything.
To be fair, the great Tilan did have some content here until he removed it, an alt or two ago. Essentially channeling Proust, with the same excess of nineteenth century verbosity. But now, it's pontification central without the balls to be measured like the rest of us.
Here in Oz we would say, a legend in his own lunchtime.
Fair point. There’s also that simple, uncomfortable truth that should be obvious to any decent, self-assured person: a reader’s standards can, and in fact should, tower far above their own craftsmanship. One can be a terrible writer and still hold exacting standards as a reader.We all want feedback and we all want to discuss opinions here. If we limit that to only people who publish then we won't get much discussion and we will get massively less feedback. If you don't like how he measures you then why do you even care if he does?
I don't know what I'm looking for, but is it okay to suck at writing and know you suck, if you like what you write?
What event?and hey, I have this event I was going to ask you to write a story for, so stop fucking around and get writing!!!!!! LOL