What's your best story?

[FrancesScott]

I did! I even sent you private feedback, which apparently does not work because nobody ever answered those^^. Let me reassure you, I found it absolutely delightful. The prose and registry alone were able to captivate me the whole way through. I also really liked the main character, sympathetic but also quite believable. I liked the mum, she was fun. Jordan herself was positively adorable. My only complaint is that there was not more of it!

I am sure a lot of people will have lamented the prose. There is an innate silliness in complaining about something being "too good".

5/5 stars.

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That’s very encouraging feedback. I’ll have to check my mail.

 

[Lifestyle66]

The "best" story of mine is the latest, "A Band of Sisters and Brothers". "To we few, we happy few, we Band of Brothers!"

I think I put more effort into developing multiple characters in this one, at least more so than I have in the past. Note that it is long at 25k words, and very misogynistic.

To head off those who nit-pick stories over the details, I wrote in the Author's Note at the beginning:
"So, don't get too focused on "that club on base wasn't there when we had cellphones" or "that's not how they treat such injuries anymore." It's just a story!

As for drawing the attention of the 1-bombers, LOL, I deliberately draw them in like a lightning rod!

 

[FrancesScott]

I did! I even sent you private feedback, which apparently does not work because nobody ever answered those^^. Let me reassure you, I found it absolutely delightful. The prose and registry alone were able to captivate me the whole way through. I also really liked the main character, sympathetic but also quite believable. I liked the mum, she was fun. Jordan herself was positively adorable. My only complaint is that there was not more of it!

I am sure a lot of people will have lamented the prose. There is an innate silliness in complaining about something being "too good".

5/5 stars.

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